this reminds me of ma poem mage dhuu even though this is a different story..ya i have seen how disparate dads look when mam left them all alone..may be by a death ...its so sad if so.... have you seen the movie "pursuit of happiness"?? its a deferent kind of story ...but it shows that as a back ground story... its a good one..it would be great if u select a more dark pic next time some parts of a one poem is hard to see due to the low contrast.