mage dooni...............

[ereshthush]

sha lassana kaviyak keep it up

 

[krizta]

Excellent.veryyy nice

 

[asta]

this reminds me of ma poem mage dhuu even though this is a different story..ya i have seen how disparate dads look when mam left them all alone..may be by a death ...its so sad if so.... have you seen the movie "pursuit of happiness"?? its a deferent kind of story ...but it shows that as a back ground story... its a good one..it would be great if u select a more dark pic next time some parts of a one poem is hard to see due to the low contrast.

Thanks for ur comments ayya.I hv nt seen that movie,bt nw like to see.Other time i will surely select a more dark one.bt i hope the pic goes with the poem.caz i couldnt find a more suitable one.Realy thanks..

 

[asta]

Thanks for all.

 

[yasiru1]

indiawe doni kiyala hituna

 

[Eclipse]

maxxa paara touching!!! good creation!!!thanx ..

 

[THiRaA]

AAw AAW AA waaaaaaaaaaaaaaW

 

[accessuser]

wow ela post ekak

 

[sagari]

Godak Lassanai sis.... Thanks ....

 

[CoolCartoon]

different poem from u...nice....

 

[sanka_classic]

lassanai godak...

 

[accessuser]

mata gathyata linawane oya lassanai.........

 

[randula01]

nice one ...............