mage puthata

[#madhu#]

 

[ERANGA21]

good

 

[Kasmadumala]

sathya ath dekemakda me.......
harima duka kathawak ..........................


padanam lassanata liyala thiyenawa..........

kep it up.

 

[--dimandi--]

dukama duka kaviyak. Man me wage poems meeta kalin dekala ne.
godak duka hithenawa..

 

[LAPD]

omg is this real? oh shit
so sorry abt ya akki, bytheway gud poem, bt try to mk ur mind

 

[chint]

 

[ishanthidi]

its so sad

 

[SLR]

soo sad..

 

[aravindalj]

dukbara kathawak
lassanai

 

[kaawya]

ane as dekata kandulu awa saththai meka kiyawaddi godak dukai meka aththakda?

 

[~ Fiona ~]

poem is really really nice
But its so sad.....

 

[motorola]

Supreb Kavi Pela..................................

 

[Zeus]

poem is really really nice
But its so sad.....

Yes sis
And
Bohoma kalekata passe me vage touching kaviyak dakke
Me mulu lokenma apuruma ,soduruma,pudumakarama badimak thama mavsenehasa kiyanne

Minissu koyi tharam usas kivvath
me subject ekedi

Sattu pava minissu tharamatama uthum bavata osovala thiyanne menne me kiyana mav senehasa ma thama

E vagema thamange putha me vidiyata loke atharala giyamath hama ammakenekma duk venne ekama vidiyatama thama

Its a great poem sis really it is

Thnk u sooooooooo much for pointing out this