magee pathuma nubai

nikini

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uhox said:
good poem nikini nangi

oyata honda kavi kusalathawayak thiyenawa. Premaya (virahawa, prema uthkarshaya..) prastutha karagath kavi walata amatharawa, jeewithe saha samajaye siduweem, vimansa prasthuta karagenath wedipura kavi liyanna...

snawedi obata eya kala hekiya :)

owu aiya liyannam...godak sthuthi aiyage upadeeshayata...
 

pamithK

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    Nawala
    senehasa gana kavi liyanna...hada'..' mage eliya wenna..

    what comes into that gap?

    anyway its nicely written..
     

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    nikini said:
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    lassanai nikini akke kaviya:) :) :)
     

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    love2meU said:
    nikini said:
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    "Adarey nathivata nubata
    Sith konaka nuba hidi thavama
    Rahath pala nolaba mama
    Hitha hanganne kohoma
    Nube sinaha pirunu
    Vatha daka daka"
    love2meU

    adarei nam oba memata
    kiyanaa lesa oya hatima
    kumata denne kandulai ganga
    nethu piya hadakarannada