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    DiLakshika said:
    Hariyata hari. oya poem eken hoda reply eka deela thiyenne.
    yashdara aththatama me wage

    Superb poem sis
    aththatama mehemada api danne nane....apita anit widiyatath hithanna puluwan...:yes: :yes:
     

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    Kasmadumala said:
    oba.....yasodara..........mohothakata....v.liu kawiyak......vima thula.rasawath bawak denei masithata..
    aththatama.eda...yasodarath.mese.sithannata.athi......
    realy.nice.1.......i enjoyed it.:D:):):yes::yes:

    thanks........
     

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    thanu26 said:
    wow!!!!!!! lagadi kiyawapu kawi walata wada godak amuthuma themawak ne akkiyoo....:D great wrk....nicely written... :yes: :yes: gd luk sisy.... :) :D

    amazing comment....really thanks dear.....!!!:yes: :yes:
     

    uhox

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    hmmm..

    bawitha kala athi basha vilasaya (poetic language) eka kaviye wasthi vishayata yogyai kiyanna puluwan...

    arthaya athin gatthama kaviye yatin diwenne " geheniyakage sithuwili dharawa" (emotional stream) bawa penawa....

    Kohoma namuth, Agamika charitha nigraha karana "thuppahi basa wilasayak ho athathwika chittharupa nethiwa oba gena athi uthsahaya prashansa kala yuthui...:yes: (eka nisa ara "niganta" kavi gonnata meka wetenne ne)

    sanwedi wasthu vishayan prathinirmanaya viya yutthe mewan ramu thulai...Apita awashaya " positive criticism" ha "modernism" concept thrimana wenne e thulin pamanai.....
    :rolleyes:

    sumal
     
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    ireshasy

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    uhox said:
    hmmm..

    bawitha kala athi basha vilasaya (poetic language) eka kaviye wasthi vishayata yogyai kiyanna puluwan...

    arthaya athin gatthama kaviye yatin diwenne " geheniyakage sithuwili dharawa" (emotional stream) bawa penawa....

    Kohoma namuth, Agamika charitha nigraha karana "thuppahi basa wilasayak ho athathwika chittharupa nethiwa oba gena athi uthsahaya prashansa kala yuthui...:yes: (eka nisa ara "niganta" kavi gonnata meka wetenne ne)

    sanwedi wasthu vishayan prathinirmanaya viya yutthe mewan ramu thulai...Apita awashaya " positive criticism" ha "modernism" concept thrimana wenne e thulin pamanai.....
    :rolleyes:





    sumal




    aththamai...
    mata meka hithunata liwwe....
    niganta kawith api rasa widinna one kiyala man hithanawa.........
    thanks.........