aththatama mehemada api danne nane....apita anit widiyatath hithanna puluwan...DiLakshika said:Hariyata hari. oya poem eken hoda reply eka deela thiyenne.
yashdara aththatama me wage
Superb poem sis
aththatama mehemada api danne nane....apita anit widiyatath hithanna puluwan...DiLakshika said:Hariyata hari. oya poem eken hoda reply eka deela thiyenne.
yashdara aththatama me wage
Superb poem sis
Kasmadumala said:oba.....yasodara..........mohothakata....v.liu kawiyak......vima thula.rasawath bawak denei masithata..
aththatama.eda...yasodarath.mese.sithannata.athi......
realy.nice.1.......i enjoyed it.![]()
wick321 said:Wow...Lassanai...Samaharawita Yasodhara Mehema Hithannath Ethi...Mokada Ayath Geheniyakne...
great wrk....nicely written...
gd luk sisy....

thanu26 said:wow!!!!!!! lagadi kiyawapu kawi walata wada godak amuthuma themawak ne akkiyoo....great wrk....nicely written...
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gd luk sisy....
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nuwanoo7 said:niyamai....... wachana ne comment karanna.... athatama mara arthayak thiyana kawiyak........ digatama liyanna sis.....

(eka nisa ara "niganta" kavi gonnata meka wetenne ne)
Kismat said:you are now very great Friend
happy to say that
uhox said:hmmm..
bawitha kala athi basha vilasaya (poetic language) eka kaviye wasthi vishayata yogyai kiyanna puluwan...
arthaya athin gatthama kaviye yatin diwenne " geheniyakage sithuwili dharawa" (emotional stream) bawa penawa....
Kohoma namuth, Agamika charitha nigraha karana "thuppahi basa wilasayak ho athathwika chittharupa nethiwa oba gena athi uthsahaya prashansa kala yuthui...(eka nisa ara "niganta" kavi gonnata meka wetenne ne)
sanwedi wasthu vishayan prathinirmanaya viya yutthe mewan ramu thulai...Apita awashaya " positive criticism" ha "modernism" concept thrimana wenne e thulin pamanai.....
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sumal