MEKA RAHASAK LU

[sampath312]

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I was not being a active member in this section and it was very recently I have been stepping in and enjoy this ..... it was just just after my first try...I saw a poem 2 days ago,when I was going through the threads and it was by my nice friend and bro "X-pert" I got the concept for this"meka rahasak lu" from this...so this poem is for love of "X- pert and Paris" and all the lovers,I have to mention I'm so new to this and this is just my 4th one and 1st in"I love you section",I would like to say im still doing learning rather than being professional so neglect if you finds it not nice...Love is some times so deep but Im not wise enough to see its depth so this is just a attempt.

this is it......
My very 1st thread in this sector of the forum Hope it's not too bad eh?
http://www.elakiri.com/forum/showthread.php?t=68739


your comments are warmly welcomed.sampath

 

[randula01]

MAXXA KAVIYAK NAE...............MOKADDA RAHASA......................

 

[DJAT]

nice one dude keep it up bro...

 

[Shiwantha]

niyamaine machan........uba koheda mechchara kal dagavila hitiye....ela

 

[sampath312]

MAXXA KAVIYAK NAE...............MOKADDA RAHASA......................

godak sthuthi..kawiyama thama ithin rahasa

 

[dilansri2]

WOW nice poem machooo

have a gr8 rhyming

i lyk it

keep it up

 

[sampath312]

niyamaine machan........uba koheda mechchara kal hagavila hitiye....ela

danne naha macho...ara samahara dewal eka parata lu ne enne

 

[maleemsg]

sha sha..den api dawasata ekaa gaane sampath bro ge kavi kiyawanwa....
hodai hodai..!
mehema kiuwata weradiyata hithanna epa kaviya kiyawagena yaddi samahara wachana wala podii nogelapiim wage denenawa..!
but anyway its nys try!
goood!

 

[sampath312]

WOW nice poem machooo

have a gr8 rhyming

i lyk it

keep it up

godak sthuthi macho...yes me even personally love that tone"lu" may be because of its sound

 

[sampath312]

sha sha..den api dawasata ekaa gaane sampath bro ge kavi kiyawanwa....
hodai hodai..!
mehema kiuwata weradiyata hithanna epa kaviya kiyawagena yaddi samahara wachana wala podii nogelapiim wage denenawa..!
but anyway its nys try!
goood!

ane pissuda ...mama may rhyme eka kiyana dey poddak therum ganna kaley ....even more when its love i finds it really difficult rather than sadness..seems to be like i can deal with sadness rather than love and joy

 

[madhu4gr]

eh me mokadda

 

[MAX200]

Hodai hodai

 

[dilansri2]

godak sthuthi macho...yes me even personally love that tone"lu" may be because of its sound

anytime machoo

yeah machoo it pleasant to the ear

 

[x-pert]

Nice one ma Bro



Siraawatama Siraa machang.. Maxx Kaviya

Keep it my brother

 

[sampath312]

eh me mokadda

poddak hithanna

 

[sampath312]

Nice one ma Bro



Siraawatama Siraa machang.. Maxx Kaviya

Keep it my brother

wow i was just telling malee" ko me miniha nahane" man danakota kiyala wow ur right there thanks ma bro...onna man man kiyapu dey kara...take care ma bro

 

[maleemsg]

ane pissuda ...mama may rhyme eka kiyana dey poddak therum ganna kaley ....even more when its love i finds it really difficult rather than sadness..seems to be like i can deal with sadness rather than love and joy

never say like that! a poet can roam anywhere he wants in his imaginations. no bounderies for it......dont worry bro go go....wonder anywhere you want feel everything form ur heart! words will come to ur mind.... never put barriers to ur talent! Love, sadness, loneliness, hatert all are in same mind so you can use all those for ur poems!

 

[krizta]

very nice

 

[rash87]

lassanai
maru aathal 1k thiyeneva

 

[maleemsg]

Nice one ma Bro



Siraawatama Siraa machang.. Maxx Kaviya

Keep it my brother

Buhahahaahahaaaaaaa

menna awilla...!!
hoda welawata aiye oya comment eka demme nethnam ada reta sampath bro ta ninda yanne ne sure..!!!