`My dream

[Clerk_Kent]

Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

 

[westpra]

Nice 1 machan..keep writing....

 

[dilansri2]

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

elane machoo

maxxa

keep it up

 

[Tharshi]

Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

nice 1 ayye.dont make it a dream make it come true

 

[Sonique]

Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

Kello 3k unahama ohoma thama

 

[Kinu]

nyc 1 aiyye

 

[dewasmitha]

nice one aiya,keep writing

 

[emimaxy]

wow kenta maxxa
keep it up
maaara porak welane

 

[maleemsg]

sometimes dreams may come true..!!!

welldone aiya..!!
Keep it up!

 

[Clerk_Kent]

Thanks All

 

[shiwankaswe]

Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

kentooooooooooooo

elama thama

mama kiwweeee
uba liyala thiyenne arayata thamaaaaaaaaaaaaa

 

[shiwankaswe]

machan uba Only You kiyala adahas kale keedenekwada

 

[tckrockz]

machan menna error 1k
last verse eke 3rd line eka
"But I now Know That"
eka
"But Now I Know That"
karana ethkota lassani

 

[rotiya]

elooooooooooooooooo
niyamai ne
apoooooooooooooooo cha
upset hinda ela keewe

 

[G-Force]

Ammtasiri...elakiri ne...

 

[rash87]

Nice one CK

 

[Clerk_Kent]

machan menna error 1k
last verse eke 3rd line eka
"But I now Know That"
eka
"But Now I Know That"
karana ethkota lassani

Thx Machoo.....

 

[Shiwantha]

ela niyamaine machooo

 

[tckrockz]

Thx Machoo.....

anytime mcho

 

[Clerk_Kent]

machan uba Only You kiyala adahas kale keedenekwada

owa ithin 5 gunaakaara walin kiyala thiyenne....