My first poem ever...

[rush16]

hey, this is my first poem, i dont know if its good....

 

[pink_lime1]

really nice i wish i could write a poem also.. but mine sound soo dumb so i nvr wrote a poem lol

 

[Sujakshan]

really nice i wish i could write a poem also.. but mine sound soo dumb so i nvr wrote a poem lol

ikno...!!

 

[randula01]

NOT BAD.........

 

[rush16]

Thnks for everyone

 

[gtkisaru]

Not Bad....I think this will help you...

http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Poem

 

[rush16]

oh thank you so much....

Not Bad....I think this will help you...

http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Poem

 

[cha_sl]

then sweet dreams .. and may ur dreams come true..

 

[Kalindugayan]

shihan kolla ela

 

[rush16]

shihan kolla ela

he he thanks....

 

[zed]

math poem 1kk liwuwa.inde link 1k dannde

 

[nimni]

great job! you should keep writing =)

 

[zed]

http://www.elakiri.com/forum/showthread.php?t=72557

my first poem

 

[sihini]

all the best

 

[dilrasan]

Really Nice Rush...Keep it up..!!

 

[Jack_Sparrow]

Nice Work sis

(mata witarai tama poems liyanna beri)

 

[dilrasan]

(mata witarai tama poems liyanna beri)

Liyanna epai puluwanda kiyala balanna...api kauruth ipadenakotama poems liyagena ei enne...

liwwama thamai danne puluwan kiyala...

 

[sherlock]

sha really nice keep posting

 

[Doly]

Nice poem dear Sis........

 

[ranuka87]

good