My First Poem

[smother]

-In Decaying Reality -

It's you I can count on,
To lend me strength when I have none.
I force myself to forget all those memories.
Pushing forward,
Leaving behind the things you've said to me.
I've burned your bridges,
And I've swallowed hard.
For the things to come,
In the end.
Pushing through,
Love less faith...
Every time I look back,
I could never forget,
I could never forgive myself.
Past ,
Stop trapping me on the shoulders.
There is no grater sorrow,
Than to recall the time we were happy.
I am reminded,
Of all the bad I've done to you...
I just end up shivering by the echo of your voice.
No matter what,
I end up with this mind numbing feeling.
I am dead inside...
Fucking worthless...
It's dark outside,
And the confidence is leaving my side.
So will your God forgive?

 

[Butter Gel]

What is the use ??

 

[yakshaya]

"I could never forgive myself.
Past ,"

elaz

 

[මම බෙනා]

සින්හල උපසිරෑසි නෑද්ද මේකේ​

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[twisted]

not easy to understand or get any clear idea..words pack some power though, and evoke feelings which cannot be pointed out.

Try to write simple things

a successful first try keep writing.

 

[smother]

What is the use ??

My life experience bro, maybe you get the whole point, anyhow this is my first poem

 

[smother]

"I could never forgive myself.
Past ,"

elaz

 

[smother]

not easy to understand or get any clear idea..words pack some power though, and evoke feelings which cannot be pointed out.

Try to write simple things

a successful first try keep writing.

First of all thank machan ,

ok long story short -
there is a girl and boy..
they did higher studies together, and then never met after the graduation, out of the blue they met. at time that girl was married to someone.
but they share everything like they had a huge bond.
become best friends withing no time, and she started to share her family probs with that boy. that boy makes her happy with all the silly jokes in the world., and that girl fell for him.

they started love, they couldn't sty without seen each other, finally Sex came in between, so they were like do sex in every possible time.
finally the girl wanted to Divorce him and come to the boy, that boy bugger felt what he doing was wrong to their family !
so he wanted to not to continue this, since then she become so religious.

something like this ban, i know it's hard to get, but this is it

 

[smother]

සින්හල උපසිරෑසි නෑද්ද මේකේ​

na patiyo

 

[මම බෙනා]

na patiyo

 

[smother]

sinhala danna ekane ban, nodanna eken liwwa

 

[twisted]

First of all thank machan ,

ok long story short -
there is a girl and boy..
they did higher studies together, and then never met after the graduation, out of the blue they met. at time that girl was married to someone.
but they share everything like they had a huge bond.
become best friends withing no time, and she started to share her family probs with that boy. that boy makes her happy with all the silly jokes in the world., and that girl fell for him.

they started love, they couldn't sty without seen each other, finally Sex came in between, so they were like do sex in every possible time.
finally the girl wanted to Divorce him and come to the boy, that boy bugger felt what he doing was wrong to their family !
so he wanted to not to continue this, since then she become so religious.

something like this ban, i know it's hard to get, but this is it

that's a messed up thing to happen to somebody anyway, worst experience make better poets and make the experience itself somewhat bearable and beautiful. I know this myself used to being a amateur poet myself..

you can write your second one as well based on same and you will see your writing improving as well as how you look at the whole matter..Keep writing.

 

[Elysium]

whatever the background, the poem is beautifully written

 

[mAjIc hAt]

ආ මෙන්න

Rep +++++​

 

[smother]

that's a messed up thing to happen to somebody anyway, worst experience make better poets and make the experience itself somewhat bearable and beautiful. I know this myself used to being a amateur poet myself..

you can write your second one as well based on same and you will see your writing improving as well as how you look at the whole matter..Keep writing.

it was totally messed up , i'd call this my first skeleton, so ill wire some more on top of this

 

[smother]

whatever the background, the poem is beautifully written

thanks

 

[r runner]

You are perfectly loss... find out reason for live... love is not a whole life its only one of thing in this life... think different way... ​

 

[smother]

You are perfectly loss... find out reason for live... love is not a whole life its only one of thing in this life... think different way... ​

i don't think i'm lost, otherwise i could still continue this.
the choice i made was correct this is just a summery of it bro.

 

[smother]

bump

 

[smother]

ආ මෙන්න

Rep +++++​