~ My first poem ~

[Hayao]

Hi friends this is my first poem.

So meka echchara lassana nowenna puluwan

Mata mekata comments denna.

Thanks.

 

[Hayao]

Why no comment???

 

[chandima3010]

Kathawa atta We need to change this Nice poem with a nice meaning! Keep it up!

 

[Hayao]

Kathawa atta We need to change this Nice poem with a nice meaning! Keep it up!

Yes bro.....what to do...That is the reality.

Thanks a lot for the comment bro!!!

 

[Hayao]

 

[Planthis]

Yup..u're r8...
This is a race..wedr v like or nt v hav to run....
bt...I dn't no..v cn't change the system...

Nice creation bro...Keep it up.....

 

[Hayao]

Yup..u're r8...
This is a race..wedr v like or nt v hav to run....
bt...I dn't no..v cn't change the system...

Nice creation bro...Keep it up.....

Thanks a lot bro!!

 

[Kasmadumala]

grate theam & nice work malliya.....
keep it up.:d
happy to see anther poet in Ek familllllly...

 

[Hayao]

grate theam & nice work malliya.....
keep it up.:d
happy to see anther poet in Ek familllllly...

Thanks a lot aiya!

Elazz!!

 

[Udperi]

Sahena lassanai
1st kiwwata awlk nam penna ne
keep it up macho

 

[Hayao]

Sahena lassanai
1st kiwwata awlk nam penna ne
keep it up macho

Thanks bro thanks a lot!

 

[chandima3010]

Yes bro.....what to do...That is the reality.

Thanks a lot for the comment bro!!!

elaz always machan what happen 2 ALz???

 

[champi*t]

Nice one
Keep it up

 

[coolnishan]

Nice Poem Yaar. Keep Writting..... All The Best!

 

[j2l]

nice creation brother ... I'll add something for the betterment of your future but please don't mind k. coz I'm not a big poet , malla the poem is in verse pattern but now and then use some rhyming words so it will be musical for the reader... and I saw just a one basic mistake... so make it correct. overall a good start as a novice keep it up all the best malla ... keep writing you got a great future !

 

[Michael]

not bad for a first timer
actually its nice
Keep it up

 

[Hayao]

Nice one
Keep it up

Thanks!!

Nice Poem Yaar. Keep Writting..... All The Best!

Thanks bro!!!

nice creation brother ... I'll add something for the betterment of your future but please don't mind k. coz I'm not a big poet , malla the poem is in verse pattern but now and then use some rhyming words so it will be musical for the reader... and I saw just a one basic mistake... so make it correct. overall a good start as a novice keep it up all the best malla ... keep writing you got a great future !

Yes brother I accept that. I didn't think about rhyming words. I just wrote the poem. I'll do like that next time. Thanks a lot for your advice bro!!!

not bad for a first timer
actually its nice
Keep it up

Thanks micheal aiya!!

 

[anuja]

Ane manda machan, mamath ohoma thamai.
Love gana hitanna gihin thamai studies kela vuneth.
aka nisa love gana hitana 1 amathaka karala tiyenne,
anyway nice poem with a different idea,
keep it up ur gud talent

 

[somadasa]

ela! keep it up macho

 

[sayu22]

nice.. keep it up..