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This is one of my old poem.
There is something which I can not explain.
Read it……& see you like it or not .......

 

Elysium

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    Horizon!
    confuse wela ine kiyane mena mekata thamay nedha nangio!
    always there is a row between heart & mind;)
    nizzz poem nangio though u written it some time back:)
     

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    Nugagoda
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    Doly

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    Elysium said:
    confuse wela ine kiyane mena mekata thamay nedha nangio!
    always there is a row between heart & mind;)
    nizzz poem nangio though u written it some time back:)

    100& agreed akkiyo
    thanks for ur comment
     

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    omg Doly itz simply awwwsm...!!!
    d z exactly wt am goin thru atm..!!!!
    so damn tru..! i knw hw it feeelzz!!
    great job!!! lovin' it!!
     

    Doly

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    ||~R_girl~|| said:
    omg Doly itz simply awwwsm...!!!
    d z exactly wt am goin thru atm..!!!!
    so damn tru..! i knw hw it feeelzz!!
    great job!!! lovin' it!!


    ohhhh
    its my pleasure sis
    thanks alot
     

    kudos_utopia

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    Wow nice poem
    Finally...after trying to understand u superb Sinhala Poems.. I understand this at a glance :P
    nice poem

    but I feel u could increase the poem's value by putting complex words...
    u know
    lyk in ur sinhalese ones
    so it takes sum tym for a person to read and try to grasp its meaning..u know

    ok ok anyway
    Maxxaaa poem ekak ;)

    :) :)
     

    kudos_utopia

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    The picture is ela...from where?

    But the poem...is good...but ekama words godak, hamathanama thiyenakota poem eka upset yanawa:yes:
     

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    Doly said:
    This is one ... it or not ...

    "To love is to risk - not being loved in return
    To hope is to risk pain
    To try is to risk failure
    But risk must be taken
    Because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing"
     

    Doly

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    Pura Pagal said:
    "To love is to risk - not being loved in return

    To hope is to risk pain
    To try is to risk failure
    But risk must be taken
    Because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing"

    hmmmmmm!
    hv to agree with you coz of your points. yes it is :yes:
     

    Doly

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    kudos_utopia said:
    Wow nice poem
    Finally...after trying to understand u superb Sinhala Poems.. I understand this at a glance :P
    nice poem

    but I feel u could increase the poem's value by putting complex words...
    u know
    lyk in ur sinhalese ones
    so it takes sum tym for a person to read and try to grasp its meaning..u know

    ok ok anyway
    Maxxaaa poem ekak ;)

    :) :)

    thanks for ur nice comment brother
    i must tell you this thing
    actually im a very simple girl & my thought also very simple which is help me to live easly in this world.
    & it has become as habbit & even my poems also very simple.

    ekama word eka maruwen maruwata dala thiyenne ekata galapena vidiyata .complex words dammanam meke meaning & rythem eka wenas wenawa.

    much appriciated your advices brother :yes: