Below One is the grammar corrected Poem of Above ... Thaxx to dilrasan ...
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keep it up..

Nice one bro...
for further reference...try to improve...
there are some grammar mistakes...but no worries..i am just telling... You can Simple make them correct when you do another...that's all..
and Btw it's not our language either...so worth try...keep it up..
it should be
"I feel the wind
Sweeps Softly..."
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... I saw dat mistake .. after i finished da ...art wrk
....Thank you again

it should be "I feel the wind" isn't it ?
good luck![]()
u knw nw it was da 2nd time i dd da same mistake ..
srry for dat 
yeahhu knw nw it was da 2nd time i dd da same mistake ..
srry for dat
Anyway Thaxx for the comnt![]()

Very nice creation, Methsri. I Like the back ground work , it's very suitable to the poem. Like you have open your heart to her. Keep it up. All the best.
Thank youuuu !!!!!!!