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methsri

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  • Dec 17, 2007
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    In ThE R3AL W0RLD
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    Below One is the grammar corrected Poem of Above ... Thaxx to dilrasan ...


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    dilrasan

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    හත් ඉලව්වෙ!
    Nice one bro...:D
    for further reference...try to improve...:D
    there are some grammar mistakes...but no worries..i am just telling... You can Simple make them correct when you do another...that's all..;)
    and Btw it's not our language either...so worth try...:yes:keep it up..:D

    it should be
    "I feel the wind
    Sweeps Softly..."
    :rolleyes:
     

    methsri

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    Nice one bro...:D
    for further reference...try to improve...:D
    there are some grammar mistakes...but no worries..i am just telling... You can Simple make them correct when you do another...that's all..;)
    and Btw it's not our language either...so worth try...:yes:keep it up..:D

    it should be
    "I feel the wind
    Sweeps Softly..."
    :rolleyes:

    Thaxx bro :) ... I saw dat mistake .. after i finished da ...art wrk :( ....Thank you again :) :)