My Pain.... Really its Paining...> my 1st thread

[DiLakshika]

The momentum which I gained
Just by your single sight,
By the flash of your smiles,
The way you were unique...

All have became out signed.
Whose ever mistake it be might.
My thoughts running over miles,
All sounds now as ultra sonic...

Your wordings made me pained,
Yes, But what you did is right.
May be I will be between the Rails,
Being a lifeless dumb corpse...





Dil

 

[||~DxxCxxxx~||]

Wow.. Really nice akke...
But, it is sad...

 

[isuruimg]

meyath onnna weda alluwa wage
nice one akkiya

 

[twisted]

ayyo kochchiyatanan paninna epa

 

[shakespeare]

The momentum which I gained
Just by your single sight,
By the flash of your smiles,
The way you were unique...

All have became out signed.
Whose ever mistake it be might.
My thoughts running over miles,
All sounds now as ultra sonic...

Your wordings made me pained,
Yes, But what you did is right.
May be I will be between the Rails,
Being a lifeless dumb corpse...





Dil

Cool Mindblowing

 

[amila.graphics]

"May be I will be between the Rails,
Being a lifeless dumb corpse..."



Do not be will U....

 

[shan_n95]

looks lyk really kwl...is diz ur first thred or ur first poem

 

[Pentagram]

oh nice 1!
yep!! its sad!

 

[G2H]

Aww it's really very nice Dil.. bt lille bit sad 2...
Keep writing ...

 

[yazara]

Itz really nice....!
And if u feel sad...

 

[Doly]

aneeeeeeeee a Sad poem from you...........
hey come on Akki..................dnt turn to Past
just forget it P.........l........e.......a.........s............e...

 

[supun75]

good one

 

[prabani_princess]

ane duka hithenawa.......