My Shining ..

[twisted]

this one is loosely related to my last poem ..so kind of like a second part to it

 

[Maddu]

Good one... Nice

 

[twisted]

Good one... Nice

thanks

 

[coolioWiZ]

makes me think about this coz it's raining over here now. i'm in a rainy mood

pretty straight forward poem, i think someone is trying to come into terms with his life's problems maybe a love failure

 

[coolnishan]

Nice Machan..

 

[twisted]

makes me think about this coz it's raining over here now. i'm in a rainy mood

pretty straight forward poem, i think someone is trying to come into terms with his life's problems maybe a love failure

love itself is a failure so aftermath is automatically a failure

 

[twisted]

Nice Machan..

thanks bro

 

[Doly]

wow...............
harima lassanai....

something going on da???

 

[twisted]

wow...............
harima lassanai....

something going on da???

hehe thank you very much ..
and nothing is going on hehe just a poem

 

[archirasika]

nice poem...i like the rhythem..but one verse is too long like...just my idea brother...keep rocking.....

 

[Doly]

hehe thank you very much ..
and nothing is going on hehe just a poem

wenna baaaaaaaaa

Poems are turning sum other way.....

i mean to love topics

 

[twisted]

nice poem...i like the rhythem..but one verse is too long like...just my idea brother...keep rocking.....

hi thanks bro how do you mean too long ? any kind of an advise would be highly appreciated

 

[twisted]

wenna baaaaaaaaa

Poems are turning sum other way.....

i mean to love topics

wenna puluwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
ok i didn't think of writing a love poem at the started but it turned out this way lol

 

[Doly]

wenna puluwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
ok i didn't think of writing a love poem at the started but it turned out this way lol

thats y m saying

it already turned

anyway keep written brother

u hv talent for Sinhala poems as well

 

[twisted]

thats y m saying

it already turned

anyway keep written brother

u hv talent for Sinhala poems as well

hehe it's still not that anythings going ..hehe thanks doly I'll keep writing

 

[Doly]

hehe it's still not that anythings going ..hehe thanks doly I'll keep writing

And A BIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Congratzzzzzzzz for your 6000 post keep going brother

 

[twisted]

And A BIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Congratzzzzzzzz for your 6000 post keep going brother

oh thanks hehe i was stuck in 5k for too long

 

[sagari]

Nice flow with simple words...Nice...

 

[wajiras]

Ice wage Nice

 

[twisted]

Nice flow with simple words...Nice...

thanks