(No)Dakina wenasa - (නො)දකින වෙනස

[maleemsg]

(No)Dakina wenasa - (නො)දකින වෙනස

මේක මේ මෑතක ඉදලා මම / අපි ගොඩක් වෙලාවට මුහුණ දෙන අත්දැකීමක්.
කවිය මම දැම්මට සම්පූර්ණ අයිතිය නම් මගේ නෙවෙයි.
නමුත් අදහස මගේ... මම ලිව්ව කවිය මීට වඩා ගොඩක් සරළයි (වචන) නමුත් වෙන එකෙනෙක් කවිය පොඩ්ඩක් කැටයම් කපලා පිංතූර දාලා හදලා දුන්නා...ඉතිං අපි දෙන්නගෙම නම් නැතුව කවිය දානවා....
මොකද මේක අපි දෙන්නගේ 50-50 නිර්මාණයක්

බලන්නකෝ එහෙනම් කොහොමද කියලා...

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[Malinga]

mulin ma kiyanna thiyenne sarala vachana yeduva kiyala kaviyak vatinne nathivenne nae. alankaaraya nathivenneth nae. eeka hamootama therum ganna puluvan vena eka thamai venne. gaburu, shaashthreeya vachana dammama kavi vichaarakayantanum kaviya vatinava. namuth samanaya ayata therum ganna tikak apahasui. meeka kivve menna me nisaa "මම ලිව්ව කවිය මීට වඩා ගොඩක් සරළයි (වචන)".

samaajaye minisaa kiyana sathvayaage kriyakarithvayak gana kerunu vigrahayankin samanvitha nirmanayak. kalu paatin dakvena kotasa ithaama saralai haa sumatai, e kotase paata kalu vunath vachana sudui. anith kotasa madak ralu bavak usulanava. eekenuth yam deyak kiyanna uthsahayak daranava kiyala hithenava. sith dekak athara godak deeval samanava hithanna puluvan kamak thiyanava. namuth anivaryen ma sith dekak kiyanne ekinekata venas. namuth yam bandeem matha e dekama apuruvata ekathuvenava. habai lookaya balana asa koi vidiya vunath thamangee gamana yaamai vatinne. apuru nirmanayak.

 

[harshafx]

Hmm...rattu(lokayaa) neda? me mala yakaata one nathi deyak na..anunge ewamai hoyanne sudu paatin thiyena tika nam deparak withara kiyewwa hehe..lassana nirmanayak..anith kenage namath damma nam hondai

 

[G2H]

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Man hithanne denna dennek wenaeka.. saha nogelapeem thamai dennekge badeemaka adithalama wenne..
Rattu kiyana katha tikak ganan gatthata kamak ne.. wediya ganan gatthoth thamai prashne.. hik hik..
Samahara wita nodutu wenas Pahuwela dakinne.. tika tika niyamapudgalaya haduna ganna hinda wentaa...
lassanai sisiyooo hithanna deyak ude pandarinma...

 

[blackroses]

maleeeeeeee........

matath oya prashnema tibba machan.... a kiwwe meeta 2yrz walata issella eyagei magei ideas sooo different.......... (taamath godak deval waladi ehemai......)...

ath antimata kalpana kala, tally wenne nati deval hoyanawata wada, tally wena deval monada kiyala hoyala balala, etana idan issarahata yanna puluwan neda kiyala.........

sooo, ada ehema gamanak awith tiyenawa api denna......

umbala denna kiyanawa wage loketa "kunuharapa" deval umbala gena hitenna puluwan.....

ath umbala denna dananwanam umbala monada karanne kiyala, ECHCHARAAAIII.........

S A V E D . . .

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adahas samana wenawata wadiya adahas asamana dennek meet unahama godak deval igena ganna puluwan....... eyagen matath -- magen eyatath...

 

[samanali1987]

love ittttttttttttttttttt !

 

[maleemsg]

mulin ma kiyanna thiyenne sarala vachana yeduva kiyala kaviyak vatinne nathivenne nae. alankaaraya nathivenneth nae. eeka hamootama therum ganna puluvan vena eka thamai venne. gaburu, shaashthreeya vachana dammama kavi vichaarakayantanum kaviya vatinava. namuth samanaya ayata therum ganna tikak apahasui. meeka kivve menna me nisaa "මම ලිව්ව කවිය මීට වඩා ගොඩක් සරළයි (වචන)".

samaajaye minisaa kiyana sathvayaage kriyakarithvayak gana kerunu vigrahayankin samanvitha nirmanayak. kalu paatin dakvena kotasa ithaama saralai haa sumatai, e kotase paata kalu vunath vachana sudui. anith kotasa madak ralu bavak usulanava. eekenuth yam deyak kiyanna uthsahayak daranava kiyala hithenava. sith dekak athara godak deeval samanava hithanna puluvan kamak thiyanava. namuth anivaryen ma sith dekak kiyanne ekinekata venas. namuth yam bandeem matha e dekama apuruvata ekathuvenava. habai lookaya balana asa koi vidiya vunath thamangee gamana yaamai vatinne. apuru nirmanayak.

Malinga aiye oya digaata wisthara kalata mama punchiyata mehema kiyannam " godak Sthuthii!"

 

[maleemsg]

Hmm...rattu(lokayaa) neda? me mala yakaata one nathi deyak na..anunge ewamai hoyanne sudu paatin thiyena tika nam deparak withara kiyewwa hehe..lassana nirmanayak..anith kenage namath damma nam hondai

e unata Rattu apita nam maru fun ekak denne kiyaweema minisa sampoorna karai ne ithin oya deparak kiyewwata kamak ne thank you... ape appooo ehema awata giyata eyage nama kiyanna beee

 

[maleemsg]

Man hithanne denna dennek wenaeka.. saha nogelapeem thamai dennekge badeemaka adithalama wenne..
Rattu kiyana katha tikak ganan gatthata kamak ne.. wediya ganan gatthoth thamai prashne.. hik hik..
Samahara wita nodutu wenas Pahuwela dakinne.. tika tika niyamapudgalaya haduna ganna hinda wentaa...
lassanai sisiyooo hithanna deyak ude pandarinma...

mage kathawedi oka poddak wenas sisiyoo... mokada mama deyak kiyanna kalin eya ma eka kiyana eka ho eya deyak kiyanna kalin mama e dema kiyana eka thamai godak welawata wenne..ekai ape padanama ....samanyen api kiyana karana dewal nogelapunoth ape padanama nam dedarala yaawi... oka ithin balana ayata penne nehe ne... ekai wede .. .ganak ne apita nam maara fun
thanx comment ekata

 

[maleemsg]

maleeeeeeee........

matath oya prashnema tibba machan.... a kiwwe meeta 2yrz walata issella eyagei magei ideas sooo different.......... (taamath godak deval waladi ehemai......)...

ath antimata kalpana kala, tally wenne nati deval hoyanawata wada, tally wena deval monada kiyala hoyala balala, etana idan issarahata yanna puluwan neda kiyala.........

sooo, ada ehema gamanak awith tiyenawa api denna......

umbala denna kiyanawa wage loketa "kunuharapa" deval umbala gena hitenna puluwan.....

ath umbala denna dananwanam umbala monada karanne kiyala, ECHCHARAAAIII.........

S A V E D . . .

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adahas samana wenawata wadiya adahas asamana dennek meet unahama godak deval igena ganna puluwan....... eyagen matath -- magen eyatath...

macho mama gangi ta daapu comment eka kiyawal me den kiyana tika kiyawahanko...

hithahan ape rate koneda pita meddata digata wawapu kettu kollekui bella lagata hitiynna konde kotata kapapu man size kellekui paare awidagena yaddi kattiyata hithenne monawada kiyala ....

mama oita wada mokuth kiyanne nehe uba hithahan

 

[maleemsg]

love ittttttttttttttttttt !

thanx Samanalee...mokakda ara mata wedding invitation ekak awe ada badinawa kiyala

 

[kadulu]

mmmmmmmm..lassanai

 

[blackroses]

macho mama gangi ta daapu comment eka kiyawal me den kiyana tika kiyawahanko...

hithahan ape rate koneda pita meddata digata wawapu kettu kollekui bella lagata hitiynna konde kotata kapapu man size kellekui paare awidagena yaddi kattiyata hithenne monawada kiyala ....

mama oita wada mokuth kiyanne nehe uba hithahan

ADALA NAA KIYALA TAMAI MATA NAM KIYANAN TIYENNEE.............

 

[samanalee]

apoooooooooo... mathak karanna epaa lol........
standard achchuwata fit wenne naththan gelapenne nae kiyala thamai ahaganna wenne kohen giyath dennage hithata hari nam kawuru monaa kiwwath adaala nae

lassanai nirmaanaya..

 

[G2H]

mage kathawedi oka poddak wenas sisiyoo... mokada mama deyak kiyanna kalin eya ma eka kiyana eka ho eya deyak kiyanna kalin mama e dema kiyana eka thamai godak welawata wenne..ekai ape padanama ....samanyen api kiyana karana dewal nogelapunoth ape padanama nam dedarala yaawi... oka ithin balana ayata penne nehe ne... ekai wede .. .ganak ne apita nam maara fun
thanx comment ekata

Ekineka.. dewal hithan widiya ekeinekata wenas...
Jaya wewaa....

 

[T.Kanch]

Api lokayata horen pala yamuda?
Lokayata horen pem karamuda?
nathnam.......... lokaya wenuwen samuganimuda?????????????

 

[archirasika]

me loke 100% galapena kawruth naha....hamoma 20%, 40% ,50% aaadee washayen galapenne...wadagath de galapena tikata adaraya kireemai..

 

[nuwa1]

Eththatama meka nodakina wenasak thama....
blacka kiwwa wage thaman karana de thaman dannawa nam echcharai...
amuthu adahasak malee nice !!!

 

[maleemsg]

mmmmmmmm..lassanai

Thanx Kadulu ...

ADALA NAA KIYALA TAMAI MATA NAM KIYANAN TIYENNEE.............

ane amme ahannath santhoosai ban

apoooooooooo... mathak karanna epaa lol........
standard achchuwata fit wenne naththan gelapenne nae kiyala thamai ahaganna wenne kohen giyath dennage hithata hari nam kawuru monaa kiwwath adaala nae
lassanai nirmaanaya..

ane sorry ithin mathak karala iwarai ne ow ow oya kiyana de sathathika eththa ... Danna 5K Thankyou hodee

Ekineka.. dewal hithan widiya ekeinekata wenas...
Jaya wewaa....

nee ooi samanai

Api lokayata horen pala yamuda?
Lokayata horen pem karamuda?
nathnam.......... lokaya wenuwen samuganimuda?????????????

oya 3n ekak wath karanne nehe

me loke 100% galapena kawruth naha....hamoma 20%, 40% ,50% aaadee washayen galapenne...wadagath de galapena tikata adaraya kireemai..

ow sthuthii

 

[Zeus]

love ittttttttttttttttttt !

Seriously Sudu manike
I love that poem tooooo
Niyamayi Malee akke and other
Thnx a lot for sharing