our love

[Ashawari]

The greatest love,
of our souls.
It is so deep,
obsessed in our spirit.
Holly as a devine scripture.
precious as a blooming bud.
But this holly intimacy,
devine superflous feeling.
Still we loked in our hearts,
Is there redemption?
The flame angles of vanity
wielding their scourge....
So let us pray for the god,
To protect the temple of our heart
Called love.......


Ashawari
2009/06/01

 

[Jack_Sparrow]

affata udu meya den eng poems uth liyanawanee ela ela keep up ur gud work nangi

 

[kasuncj]

hm hm hm
nice work

 

[Ashawari]

affata udu meya den eng poems uth liyanawanee ela ela keep up ur gud work nangi

ay hoda naddaaaaaa

thnx podi comment ekata

 

[Ashawari]

affata udu meya den eng poems uth liyanawanee ela ela keep up ur gud work nangi

ay hoda naddaaaaaa

thnx podi comment ekata

 

[kitty***]

wow.....good job nanga....
keep it up

 

[Doly]

Its really nice dear sis

 

[dilrasan]

nice work...keep it up...hope to help when i come home..

 

[twisted]

not bad, it doesn't flow really good ..more like a bunch of lines.
keep writing. good luck.

 

[lek]

oyamada liwwe.....
nyc work..

 

[Ashawari]

oyamada liwwe.....
nyc work..

ay oya hithuwe kawru kiyalada

 

[Ashawari]

comments dapu , poem eka balapu siyalu denatama thnx hode