revenges a by product of loveand it's as much sweet as love..even sweeter when you do it right
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now ..i don't believe in that but that sure gives an idea for poetry don't you think.



my end will be my bloody desire
in flames I seek comfort, in fire.
the cruelty of love shall not go untold
the love of cruelty, the heart of cold
the rose full of thorns, the bloodiest of all
still I shall kiss it and favor my fall
when beauty of the rose has taken it's toll
the love of thorns, the heart of charcoal.


lol is tht highlighted part refer to me ?
aww thz is simply awesomedrown me in, the sweetest of tastes
in the sea of sorrow, not a tear shall waste.
bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles

inspired by the poem anjala posted here today "revenge" and this is the first english poem i wrote after like 9 months...so excuse all the flaws.
He he. Nicely done rhyming also well protected. bro keep it up
revenge is nt sweet
me wage ekak liyanna
Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa
Hai nahi hai nahi
Aashiq koi mujhsa tera
Tu mere liye bandagi![]()

ane manda me boothaya kawada oluwen yai da kiyala he he 
Meyata Hindhi pissuwaane manda me boothaya kawada oluwen yai da kiyala he he
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ai akkita hindi pixxuwa nadda
meka ain wena ekak naa
oya sng eke kcochchara lassana meaning ekak thiyanawada
wow maara lassana sng ekak
and movie ekath duka hithenawa
eth man films baluwa O/L wenakam film ekak release wuna gaman baluwa. hindhi kata kala haki man hindhi balanne without subtitles .loku wenakota e pissuwa giya.Habei mata hindhi nalu nili pissuwak nam tibbe na kwadawath.dan man asa Hollywood films walata.
Ehema hindhi pissuwak tibune naeth man films baluwa O/L wenakam film ekak release wuna gaman baluwa. hindhi kata kala haki man hindhi balanne without subtitles .loku wenakota e pissuwa giya.Habei mata hindhi nalu nili pissuwak nam tibbe na kwadawath.dan man asa Hollywood films walata.
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අයි කාන්ට් අන්ඩස්ටෑන්ඩ් දිස් ශිට්.. ම්යි ඉන්ග්ලිශ් ඊස් වෙරි බෑඩ්.. මේකෙ තේරුම සිංහලෙන් දාපන්කො..
අයි ඈම් සොරි ෆො එනි ඉන්කොන්වීනියන්ස් කෝස්ඩ්...






Mostly yes...It's true...
Nice work....

revenge is nt sweet
me wage ekak liyanna
Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa
Hai nahi hai nahi
Aashiq koi mujhsa tera
Tu mere liye bandagi![]()
I luv thz verse aiye specially tht highlighted part![]()
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lol is tht highlighted part refer to me ?
Thts so rude
aww thz is simply awesome
no the highlighted part wasn't directed at you..thanks again nangi. ahh then honors should goes to me tooHe he. Nicely done rhyming also well protected. bro keep it up
i thank you for that
what in the blue fucking hell does that mean![]()
yeah had it not been for your poem, this wouldn't have been written in the first placei thank you for that
and thanks again for encouraging. ..i did expect a harsh criticism since i kinda did that at your poems![]()

here is da meaning
zara si dil mein de jagaah tu…
(just give me a little corner in your heart…)
zara sa apna le banaa…
(and just make me feel your own, just a bit…)
zara sa khaabon mein sajaa tu…
(and just decorate your dreams with me, my love…)
zara sa yaadon mein basaa…
(and please make me a part of your thoughts…)
main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
(for i love you beyond limits, my love…)
fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah
(and i am all for you, beyond your imagination, my love!)

මැක්සා !!
මම අදනෙ මෙක දැක්කෙ

lol i am nt good at criticizing others u know it nah aiye![]()

man its too cliche..just like any other love song ive heard![]()
love is da same ne
love dsnt chnge

you watch too much hindi movies don't you![]()
ae movies attha ewa
ewa wala thanikara attha ewa thiyenne
keep watching lol.