pain that smiles..

RuwinRTY

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revenges a by product of love :) and it's as much sweet as love..even sweeter when you do it right :rofl:

now ..i don't believe in that but that sure gives an idea for poetry don't you think.

:no::no:
revenge is nt sweet

me wage ekak liyanna

Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

Hai nahi hai nahi
Aashiq koi mujhsa tera
Tu mere liye bandagi :love:
 

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ƃuoႨәq ! әɹәႡʍәɯos


my end will be my bloody desire
in flames I seek comfort, in fire.
the cruelty of love shall not go untold
the love of cruelty, the heart of cold



I luv thz verse aiye specially tht highlighted part :D
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the rose full of thorns, the bloodiest of all
still I shall kiss it and favor my fall
when beauty of the rose has taken it's toll
the love of thorns, the heart of charcoal.


:eek::eek::eek: lol is tht highlighted part refer to me
?
Thts so rude :P

drown me in, the sweetest of tastes
in the sea of sorrow, not a tear shall waste.
bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles
aww thz is simply awesome :D

inspired by the poem anjala posted here today "revenge" and this is the first english poem i wrote after like 9 months...so excuse all the flaws.


ahh then honors should goes to me too :P He he. Nicely done rhyming also well protected. bro keep it up
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ƃuoႨәq ! әɹәႡʍәɯos
ai akkita hindi pixxuwa nadda:rofl:
meka ain wena ekak naa
oya sng eke kcochchara lassana meaning ekak thiyanawada
wow maara lassana sng ekak
and movie ekath duka hithenawa

Ehema hindhi pissuwak tibune na :D eth man films baluwa O/L wenakam film ekak release wuna gaman baluwa. hindhi kata kala haki man hindhi balanne without subtitles .loku wenakota e pissuwa giya.Habei mata hindhi nalu nili pissuwak nam tibbe na kwadawath.dan man asa Hollywood films walata.:)
 

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Ehema hindhi pissuwak tibune na :D eth man films baluwa O/L wenakam film ekak release wuna gaman baluwa. hindhi kata kala haki man hindhi balanne without subtitles .loku wenakota e pissuwa giya.Habei mata hindhi nalu nili pissuwak nam tibbe na kwadawath.dan man asa Hollywood films walata.:)

ow ithin tum kamathi ara ED ta ne:rofl:
akkita den wahila thiyenne ED ge pixxuwa
twilight 2 walin nawathuwoth nam akkita duka hithei neda
mama nam hindi movies walata aasa ewa wala loku meaning ekak thiyanawa
specially in sngs
mama issella damme
ea wage sngs maara lassanai
 

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    In the hell naaaa.... may be in heaven
    අයි කාන්ට් අන්ඩස්ටෑන්ඩ් දිස් ශිට්.. ම්යි ඉන්ග්ලිශ් ඊස් වෙරි බෑඩ්.. මේකෙ තේරුම සිංහලෙන් දාපන්කො..
    අයි ඈම් සොරි ෆො එනි ඉන්කොන්වීනියන්ස් කෝස්ඩ්... :dull:

    :shocked::shocked::lol::lol::lol::lol:
     

    twisted

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    Mostly yes...It's true...
    Nice work....

    thanks bro :)

    :no::no:
    revenge is nt sweet

    me wage ekak liyanna

    Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
    Zara sa apna le bana
    Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
    Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

    Hai nahi hai nahi
    Aashiq koi mujhsa tera
    Tu mere liye bandagi :love:

    what in the blue fucking hell does that mean :lol:



    I luv thz verse aiye specially tht highlighted part :D
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    :eek::eek::eek: lol is tht highlighted part refer to me
    ?
    Thts so rude :P

    aww thz is simply awesome :D


    hehe thanks alot :) no the highlighted part wasn't directed at you..thanks again nangi.


    ahh then honors should goes to me too :P He he. Nicely done rhyming also well protected. bro keep it up

    yeah had it not been for your poem, this wouldn't have been written in the first place :) i thank you for that
    and thanks again for encouraging. ..i did expect a harsh criticism since i kinda did that at your poems :lol:
     

    RuwinRTY

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    what in the blue fucking hell does that mean :lol:

    here is da meaning

    zara si dil mein de jagaah tu…
    (just give me a little corner in your heart…)
    zara sa apna le banaa…
    (and just make me feel your own, just a bit…)
    zara sa khaabon mein sajaa tu…
    (and just decorate your dreams with me, my love…)
    zara sa yaadon mein basaa…
    (and please make me a part of your thoughts…)
    main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
    (for i love you beyond limits, my love…)
    fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah
    (and i am all for you, beyond your imagination, my love!)
     

    twisted

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    here is da meaning

    zara si dil mein de jagaah tu…
    (just give me a little corner in your heart…)
    zara sa apna le banaa…
    (and just make me feel your own, just a bit…)
    zara sa khaabon mein sajaa tu…
    (and just decorate your dreams with me, my love…)
    zara sa yaadon mein basaa…
    (and please make me a part of your thoughts…)
    main chaahun tujhko meri jaan bepanaah
    (for i love you beyond limits, my love…)
    fidaa hoon tujhpe meri jaan bepanaah
    (and i am all for you, beyond your imagination, my love!)

    man its too cliche..just like any other love song ive heard :lol:

    මැක්සා !!
    මම අදනෙ මෙක දැක්කෙ

    thanks bro :)

    lol i am nt good at criticizing others u know it nah aiye :D

    thats good lol less you do that less you be hated. :)