pain that smiles..

[Amalka101]

Typical Twisty ........... finds a dark side of everything

''my end will be my bloody desire
in flames I seek comfort, in fire.
the cruelty of love shall not go untold
the love of cruelty, the heart of cold''

Ok...... I quoted this part...... damn I really can't put my feelings in to words.

Any ways, an awesome poem bro......keep it up

 

[twisted]

Typical Twisty ........... finds a dark side of everything

''my end will be my bloody desire
in flames I seek comfort, in fire.
the cruelty of love shall not go untold
the love of cruelty, the heart of cold''

Ok...... I quoted this part...... damn I really can't put my feelings in to words.

Any ways, an awesome poem bro......keep it up

hey thanks alot hehe glad you didnt quote last lines
hmm i dont make them dark lol they somehow end up dark thank you alot again nangi.

 

[chintha4u]

they says deeper the pain, more pleasure the revenge make u..
so y hesitate ee ??

good one bro...

 

[twisted]

they says deeper the pain, more pleasure the revenge make u..
so y hesitate ee ??

good one bro...

lol waiting for the righttime

thanks alot bro.

 

[Nisha.hasanthi]

nice..!!

 

[twisted]

nice..!!

thank you

 

[dulhari]

I don't know what to say, Some words are rude but some are really touching. most of the time you are right. i would say very creative work than nice.

Thats what i feel Awantha
well done

 

[twisted]

I don't know what to say, Some words are rude but some are really touching. most of the time you are right. i would say very creative work than nice.

Thats what i feel Awantha
well done

thanks alot akke for your comment.

 

[Nisha.hasanthi]

nice

 

[twisted]

nice

you already said that ..but thanks again

 

[Samantha567]

අයි කාන්ට් අන්ඩස්ටෑන්ඩ් දිස් ශිට්.. ම්යි ඉන්ග්ලිශ් ඊස් වෙරි බෑඩ්.. මේකෙ තේරුම සිංහලෙන් දාපන්කො..
අයි ඈම් සොරි ෆො එනි ඉන්කොන්වීනියන්ස් කෝස්ඩ්...

අයි කාන්ට් අන්ඩස්ටෑන්ඩ් දිස් ශිට්.. ම්යි ඉන්ග්ලිශ් ඊස් වෙරි බෑඩ්..

අයි ඈම් සොරි ෆො එනි ඉන්කොන්වීනියන්ස් කෝස්ඩ්...

Machan me Tamilda?

 

[twisted]

අයි කාන්ට් අන්ඩස්ටෑන්ඩ් දිස් ශිට්.. ම්යි ඉන්ග්ලිශ් ඊස් වෙරි බෑඩ්..

අයි ඈම් සොරි ෆො එනි ඉන්කොන්වීනියන්ස් කෝස්ඩ්...

Machan me Tamilda?

is this supposed to be ironic?

 

[cryztalz]

how far I'd go to see your face
changes as I lay my pain upon you
how sweet did I think of it always
the moment I'd smell the rose I grew

the pain that held me to my lover
will wither away as i pluck out this flower
to reach the flower through thorns
my bloody hands must, must go on

the cracked will be seared by the drought
the eternal drought upon my heart you brought
the sympathy i lack, in vain will be sought
in my blazing eyes, in my dead thoughts.

my end will be my bloody desire
in flames I seek comfort, in fire.
the cruelty of love shall not go untold
the love of cruelty, the heart of cold

the rose full of thorns, the bloodiest of all
still I shall kiss it and favor my fall
when beauty of the rose has taken it's toll
the love of thorns, the heart of charcoal.

drown me in, the sweetest of tastes
in the sea of sorrow, not a tear shall waste.
bitter the love, the love that cries
sweeter the pain, the pain that smiles

inspired by the poem anjala posted here today "revenge" and this is the first english poem i wrote after like 9 months...so excuse all the flaws.
​

ive spent hours on google looking for quotes and this is like all my favourite quotes put together!
unfuckingbelievable

ps :- i jus wanted to quote the best few lines but i cant make up my mind lol

 

[MR.BILLA]

අයි කාන්ට් අන්ඩස්ටෑන්ඩ් දිස් ශිට්.. ම්යි ඉන්ග්ලිශ් ඊස් වෙරි බෑඩ්.. මේකෙ තේරුම සිංහලෙන් දාපන්කො..
අයි ඈම් සොරි ෆො එනි ඉන්කොන්වීනියන්ස් කෝස්ඩ්..​

 

[twisted]

ive spent hours on google looking for quotes and this is like all my favourite quotes put together!
unfuckingbelievable

ps :- i jus wanted to quote the best few lines but i cant make up my mind lol

really?? I don't even remember having written this lolz. thanks for your real kind and encouraging words.

අයි කාන්ට් අන්ඩස්ටෑන්ඩ් දිස් ශිට්.. ම්යි ඉන්ග්ලිශ් ඊස් වෙරි බෑඩ්.. මේකෙ තේරුම සිංහලෙන් දාපන්කො..
අයි ඈම් සොරි ෆො එනි ඉන්කොන්වීනියන්ස් කෝස්ඩ්..​

It's nothing important to understand mate.

 

[Henry L]

your good old shit getting bumped again and again

 

[twisted]

your good old shit getting bumped again and again

I'm fucking embarrassed lol

 

[Henry L]

I'm fucking embarrassed lol

from these threads, it seems those days you weren't a fucking bastard like now

 

[twisted]

from these threads, it seems those days you weren't a fucking bastard like now

I have always been what I've become..

 

[Henry L]

I have always been what I've become..

and it has always been full of BS