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Malinga

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    saralava ha hadavathata danena lesa liyala thiyanava. atheetha mathakayan hadavathata nirantharava labagena nolabena deyak venuven duk veemanum etharum sudusu karayak vanne nae. kohoma vunath hadavathata e dee therum karanna apahasu venna puluvan sahenna kaalayak yanakan. hithaka hangeem apuruvata rachanakara thiyanava.
     

    kepu

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    Malinga said:
    saralava ha hadavathata danena lesa liyala thiyanava. atheetha mathakayan hadavathata nirantharava labagena nolabena deyak venuven duk veemanum etharum sudusu karayak vanne nae. kohoma vunath hadavathata e dee therum karanna apahasu venna puluvan sahenna kaalayak yanakan. hithaka hangeem apuruvata rachanakara thiyanava.
    hamadaama wage lassanata pada tika amunala ewala thiyena niramanayak malinga ge.

    godak sthuthiy machan
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    kepu

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    archirasika said:
    good poem... but i dont like the quality of pesimist....

    it gives a feeling that you are about to cry or something....

    keep it up... welcome back kepu....

    he he bro.. first I should thank 2 you for this kind of comment..
    I'm writing like this b coz , my feelings about love , r going like u mentioned now.. I'm still feeling the love & got hurt of it.. so don't misunderstand me.. thanks