Please Come Back!!!

mentor_ub

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Elysium said:
wowee a nice poem though it's a sad poem:)
'to my darkened life
but you took it back
justleaving me the darkness'
'I felt the pain you feel
when you start to cry'
'I was tired of searching
someone who can trust me'
hm these verses r really great touching bro they r really revealing ur expectation;)
& it's really giving happy cuz she came back;)
thanks 4 sharing this poem with us:D is this ur 1st plot?
yup,But I wont write anymore...;) ...she's back in action...
 

Doly

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mentor_ub said:


If you like me as much as I like you
Come and tell me that you do
Coz it is nice to know that I am loved
By the person I truly love......

With me you'll never be blue
No matter what it takes, I will stand by you
I will do anything to make your life worthwhile
I would even catch a moonbeam to make you smile...

When you're feeling down and weary
I will hold out my hand and ease your agony.
I will never leave your side
Amidst the stormy days and nights...

When you're scared and lost in the night
I will be there and be your light
I will show you the way
And never let you go astray

But if you're in love with someone other than me
And with her you feel so happy
Just let me know
Coz then, I will let you go...

 

Jack_Sparrow

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    Doly said:
    If you like me as much as I like you
    Come and tell me that you do
    Coz it is nice to know that I am loved
    By the person I truly love......

    With me you'll never be blue
    No matter what it takes, I will stand by you
    I will do anything to make your life worthwhile
    I would even catch a moonbeam to make you smile...

    When you're feeling down and weary
    I will hold out my hand and ease your agony.
    I will never leave your side
    Amidst the stormy days and nights...

    When you're scared and lost in the night
    I will be there and be your light
    I will show you the way
    And never let you go astray

    But if you're in love with someone other than me
    And with her you feel so happy
    Just let me know
    Coz then, I will let you go...

    :rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes: