poems of your life

[twisted]

hi

when we write i guess sometime we write down things in poems that personally matter to us ..in which you could find something very special for yourself..like you've written your life down in that certain poem..

so this my invitation is to you people who write poems here to post such poems that you think very special to you in an expressive way..Ive put out things as poems that i couldn't express in no other way.. i believe all of you have written that sort of poems ..so why not share them with others..

I'll start lol i have much more than one ..but i chose this for meaning of this has somewhat been a turning point in my life lol

"Smiles Weakly"

breathing machines cannot feel
if my world is fake or real
it will cost me breaths and sighs
to hold on

there are places I have been
fucked up pictures I have seen
i will mend them into the skies
and just move on

if i have a heart that cried
to hold it through this endless ride
i have strength to stay in fight
and to smile alone

i know i have laughed and lied
again i can’t die once I’ve died
if I’ll be a silent light
for a dark zone

leave this dying mind behind
“still there’s love” it will remind
i will smile through darkest nights
it outshone..

 

[prabani_princess]

ok then........

life...
life is hard
but so is death
but most of all
love is best
treat it like
the best thing yet
one day you'll find
you loved ones chest.........

 

[twisted]

ok then........

life...
life is hard
but so is death
but most of all
love is best
treat it like
the best thing yet
one day you'll find
you loved ones chest.........

hmm nice..looks like a feeling you'll have in common though

 

[prabani_princess]

i love the way you look at me
ur eyes so bright
shining at me
u sparkle in the night
like 2 beautiful stars
please dnt leave me
u r my light
u r my sight.........

 

[twisted]

i love the way you look at me
ur eyes so bright
shining at me
u sparkle in the night
like 2 beautiful stars
please dnt leave me
u r my light
u r my sight.........

looks like you have many of those personal poems

 

[prabani_princess]

looks like you have many of those personal poems

yah but i imagine a lot

 

[twisted]

yah but i imagine a lot

hehe then write more poems outa those images in your mind..

 

[prabani_princess]

hehe then write more poems outa those images in your mind..

i cnt remember most of them...........wen i remember i put some inn

 

[twisted]

i cnt remember most of them...........wen i remember i put some inn

thank you

looks like not many people interested in sharing such thoughts..

 

[pamithK]

I breath upon a tear..
that you shaped just like a heart..
I wait upon a hope
that you placed..many moons ago..

Still breathing..i am waiting
for your answer..
I am hoping..that your choice
of word..
would please me..
and realize my ultimate dream..

Its your turn girl..
please put on that
irresistible smile..
and say you love me..
for i will listen to it..
for ever..

 

[prabani_princess]

I breath upon a tear..
that you shaped just like a heart..
I wait upon a hope
that you placed..many moons ago..

Still breathing..i am waiting
for your answer..
I am hoping..that your choice
of word..
would please me..
and realize my ultimate dream..

Its your turn girl..
please put on that
irresistible smile..
and say you love me..
for i will listen to it..
for ever..

that is soo nice i really like it

 

[twisted]

I breath upon a tear..
that you shaped just like a heart..
I wait upon a hope
that you placed..many moons ago..

Still breathing..i am waiting
for your answer..
I am hoping..that your choice
of word..
would please me..
and realize my ultimate dream..

Its your turn girl..
please put on that
irresistible smile..
and say you love me..
for i will listen to it..
for ever..

hmm thanks..this is very nicely writen ..you should post more here

 

[coolioWiZ]

Nice thread awa, saw some great poems here

hmm I dunno what to post in reply, maybe "The Elder" reflects my current mood.
But still I feel what I've experienced after coming to this country generally is more related to "SwanCall", so here is Swan Call


swans are flying high tonight
upon the endless orange skies
a call from winter i feel is high
they all forgot me they all fly away

there was sunlight bright and strong
a few days ago i remember
as i basked on a lake of silvery white
the music of her croon had my ears

from deep within was a sense of calm
i realized the taste of freedom
it held me high deep in her bosom
sparkling drops splattered on her silvery wings

why i wonder now why it took time
to realize they would never have called
i should have gone but it's too late now
they are gone and she is gone too

i will watch them fly high and away
till this orange sky fades to dark
my silvery lake will then release
all it's dark secrets hidden deep within
only for me because i stayed here
i stayed only because they left me here

 

[coolioWiZ]

I breath upon a tear..
that you shaped just like a heart..
I wait upon a hope
that you placed..many moons ago..

Still breathing..i am waiting
for your answer..
I am hoping..that your choice
of word..
would please me..
and realize my ultimate dream..

Its your turn girl..
please put on that
irresistible smile..
and say you love me..
for i will listen to it..
for ever..

nice one bro, a common situation to many of us, put nicely into words

 

[coolioWiZ]

i love the way you look at me
ur eyes so bright
shining at me
u sparkle in the night
like 2 beautiful stars
please dnt leave me
u r my light
u r my sight.........

hmm another one for the same common cause nice

 

[twisted]

Nice thread awa, saw some great poems here

hmm I dunno what to post in reply, maybe "The Elder" reflects my current mood.
But still I feel what I've experienced after coming to this country generally is more related to "SwanCall", so here is Swan Call


swans are flying high tonight
upon the endless orange skies
a call from winter i feel is high
they all forgot me they all fly away

there was sunlight bright and strong
a few days ago i remember
as i basked on a lake of silvery white
the music of her croon had my ears

from deep within was a sense of calm
i realized the taste of freedom
it held me high deep in her bosom
sparkling drops splattered on her silvery wings

why i wonder now why it took time
to realize they would never have called
i should have gone but it's too late now
they are gone and she is gone too

i will watch them fly high and away
till this orange sky fades to dark
my silvery lake will then release
all it's dark secrets hidden deep within
only for me because i stayed here
i stayed only because they left me here

thanks lol and I'm not going to interpret this again lol

 

[pamithK]

hmm thanks..this is very nicely writen ..you should post more here

i hav posted a LOT of stuff..but now kinda retired..with work n all..but ur an awesome poet..keep up the good work

 

[twisted]

i hav posted a LOT of stuff..but now kinda retired..with work n all..but ur an awesome poet..keep up the good work

oh that flatters me lol thank you very much

btw do you have a blog site or something where i could read more of yours..what you posted here really interested me ..such a waste of talent if you don't write anymore cos you are good at it

 

[pamithK]

oh that flatters me lol thank you very much

btw do you have a blog site or something where i could read more of yours..what you posted here really interested me ..such a waste of talent if you don't write anymore cos you are good at it

http://pamithkodikara.blogspot.com/ thats the one..send me ur one aswell

 

[twisted]

http://pamithkodikara.blogspot.com/ thats the one..send me ur one aswell

thanks

here you go http://crownlessxx.wordpress.com/