poems of your life

[twisted]

hmm if someone puts their darkest thoughts, personal stuff in to poetry it means they want some attention. sometimes we crave for an audience, some one to listen to our problems, when we find noone who we can trust we put them into poetry, maybe not in a direct way.
we write these stuff just because we want attention, that's why we finally show off our poetry. if ppl bring something intensely personal to poetry they will defintely try to show off . . maybe online, maybe show to close friends with some offhand comments, maybe even secretly write em on the school blackboard lol personal stuff which is written is supposed to be shown, so they are gonna take this chance to show off

oh rot ..are you directing that at me now don't try to take that agony which bacts caused you out on me ..you've got a rotten sense of humour lol and everybody needs attention whether they agree or not..lol let my craving for attention dwell itself and others post their stuff here and get some you-know-what lol you should post more lol..after all you are right..sheer purpose of me writing poems is expressing inside that i couldn't simply put out in speech lol "we will always be so much more human than we wish to be"

 

[coolioWiZ]

oh rot ..are you directing that at me now don't try to take that agony which bacts caused you out on me ..you've got a rotten sense of humour lol and everybody needs attention whether they agree or not..lol let my craving for attention dwell itself and others post their stuff here and get some you-know-what lol you should post more lol..after all you are right..sheer purpose of me writing poems is expressing inside that i couldn't simply put out in speech lol "we will always be so much more human than we wish to be"

lol none of this is aimed at you awa and if you feel like taking that hat, it's up to you. i remember it's me who forced you to show up in first case.

"we will always be so much more human than we wish to be" it's sheer fantastic i agree. but still there are something better hidden than shown off. and about bacteria, i'm finished with them for life, i don't think i'm gonna ecconter them again at a lab.

 

[twisted]

lol none of this is aimed at you awa and if you feel like taking that hat, it's up to you. i remember it's me who forced you to show up in first case.

"we will always be so much more human than we wish to be" it's sheer fantastic i agree. but still there are something better hidden than shown off. and about bacteria, i'm finished with them for life, i don't think i'm gonna ecconter them again at a lab.

i was kidding lol forget all attention garbage

and that quoted line you know ..daniel gildenlow wrote it..how creative ..he's teh writer

 

[coolioWiZ]

i was kidding lol forget all attention garbage

and that quoted line you know ..daniel gildenlow wrote it..how creative ..he's teh writer

lol POS ... btw it's MJK who needs to be shot, so i'll leave this guy aside

and to get this thread back in to track, i'll post "The Elder"

when you feel like its all over
all you can do is fly
when your soul counts the daylight stars
all you can do is try

beside the solemn lake shore
silent and serene as ever been
if you hear the long grass whisper
it is never strange, promise i have seen

on the endless plains you roam
coolness of breeze lifts your spirits
if you see the patterns the wind drew
it is never strange, i swear to no limits

when you feel like the moon is singing
all you can do is abide
when ancient trees bow to your presence
all you can do is guide

as you move deep in the moonlit path
the wolf pack tread silent and low
if you heed their calling to you
it is never strange, accept the flow

under ancient grooves of wooden heart
fables of lore are read all aloud
if you understand the mystic words
it is never strange, you are allowed

when the mantle passes on to you
take it with all your heart and soul
when they all call you elder
all you can do is bow

 

[twisted]

lol POS ... btw it's MJK who needs to be shot, so i'll leave this guy aside

and to get this thread back in to track, i'll post "The Elder"

when you feel like its all over
all you can do is fly
when your soul counts the daylight stars
all you can do is try

beside the solemn lake shore
silent and serene as ever been
if you hear the long grass whisper
it is never strange, promise i have seen

on the endless plains you roam
coolness of breeze lifts your spirits
if you see the patterns the wind drew
it is never strange, i swear to no limits

when you feel like the moon is singing
all you can do is abide
when ancient trees bow to your presence
all you can do is guide

as you move deep in the moonlit path
the wolf pack tread silent and low
if you heed their calling to you
it is never strange, accept the flow

under ancient grooves of wooden heart
fables of lore are read all aloud
if you understand the mystic words
it is never strange, you are allowed

when the mantle passes on to you
take it with all your heart and soul
when they all call you elder
all you can do is bow

you are become envious about mjk .. elbow deep the borderline lol forget them

now is this personal to you..it is to me lol
i just wonder how i always see beyond the fantasy like words to find that meaning of a cheerfulness outa this..great work dude..my favorite from you ..

 

[coolioWiZ]

you are become envious about mjk .. elbow deep the borderline lol forget them

now is this personal to you..it is to me lol
i just wonder how i always see beyond the fantasy like words to find that meaning of a cheerfulness outa this..great work dude..my favorite from you ..

about tool i got no words, they can go where ever longcat went. lmao forgotten now

hmm personal coz sometimes i feel there are a lots of ppl who depends on me. i've got no choice but to abide

it's something i don't want to write here publicly, but here everyone seems to be in their own shells and so lonely, it's how i feel and when ppl comes to me complaining or looking for comfort, i can't avoid listening to them. the elder is written for all of them, as something to lift them when they feel like all hope is lost. or maybe i was thinking about modesty, overt modesty is also harmful, when someone bestows you power you should accept it

 

[twisted]

about tool i got no words, they can go where ever longcat went. lmao forgotten now

hmm personal coz sometimes i feel there are a lots of ppl who depends on me. i've got no choice but to abide

it's something i don't want to write here publicly, but here everyone seems to be in their own shells and so lonely, it's how i feel and when ppl comes to me complaining or looking for comfort, i can't avoid listening to them. the elder is written for all of them, as something to lift them when they feel like all hope is lost. or maybe i was thinking about modesty, overt modesty is also harmful, when someone bestows you power you should accept it

may be longcat could play bass at mjk's next project

btw looks like ive got this one right ..but never knew that dark sanctuary you were talking about was within yourself lol ..still i can like this lol

i could await lonely souls with spread arms while I'm in my dying bride's arms but nobody would come and rest.. it's got it's own charms hmm

 

[coolioWiZ]

may be longcat could play bass at mjk's next project

btw looks like ive got this one right ..but never knew that dark sanctuary you were talking about was within yourself lol ..still i can like this lol

i could await lonely souls with spread arms while I'm in my dying bride's arms but nobody would come and rest.. it's got it's own charms hmm

lol ppl like it for different reasons, btw someone could think it's powermetal influence too hehe

 

[twisted]

lol ppl like it for different reasons, btw someone could think it's powermetal influence too hehe

lol i have a whole new perspective regarding human kind these days..i hope it won't fade away..

 

[coolioWiZ]

lol i have a whole new perspective regarding human kind these days..i hope it won't fade away..

hmm of human bondage?

 

[twisted]

hmm of human bondage?

lol ya..do you still recall the content?

 

[coolioWiZ]

lol ya..do you still recall the content?

hmm no, it was a long time ago when i was in lanka, might be i still got an ebook . .as i remember it started with a case of child birth or atleast it involved a bed.

 

[twisted]

hmm no, it was a long time ago when i was in lanka, might be i still got an ebook . .as i remember it started with a case of child birth or atleast it involved a bed.

ya involved a bed ..main characters mother's death bed lol

i hate myself for being unable to read ebooks

 

[coolioWiZ]

ya involved a bed ..main characters mother's death bed lol

i hate myself for being unable to read ebooks

lol my memory is not good . .it was sometime ago . . i don't remember anything else from the book. but looks like it's inspiring you, maybe it will be in your poetry

 

[twisted]

lol my memory is not good . .it was sometime ago . . i don't remember anything else from the book. but looks like it's inspiring you, maybe it will be in your poetry

hmm main character philip was quite emo..so i doubt it but let's see of course the book is inspiring me ..