Porondu..........

[kadulu]

Paladala sath mala...
Andala ran sela
Kendala yami kiwa...
Samanalaya ko kohida...?

 

[G2H]

hmm samahara welawata samaharu ohoma karanawa eken anith kenata danena wedanawa gena nohitha
punchi unata harima lassana nirmanayak..

 

[paba123]

aioooooooo samanalaya gihinda

 

[aravindalj]

Ko koheda samanalaya
Ran kenden Degili benda
Sihina dadakinnata hanthaneta yamu kee
Ko koheda Samanalaya????

 

[CoolCartoon]

samanaliya giyanam......yanna arapan.....aye aye a gana hithanna epa.....

 

[kadulu]

lassanai pilithuru kawiya....adahas walata sthuti...samanallu ehema thamai,enawatath wadiya wegen yanawa..kiwawapu hamaotama thanks.

 

[pamithK]

sad stuff...maybe it goes with your name ..

no seriously..it has a reference to a lot of people i know..they're all waiting for their butterfly..and you hav carefully put the words in..nice stuff..keep writing

 

[aravindalj]

EE bawa dena denath Samanalayekutama Pem karapu ekai weredda.... Sundara sithak hoya ganna Hedayak nethi

lassanai pilithuru kawiya....adahas walata sthuti...samanallu ehema thamai,enawatath wadiya wegen yanawa..kiwawapu hamaotama thanks.

 

[asanka10]

Ops ganan ganna epa okzzz...... owa ohoma tha,,,,
mona karannada itin...

 

[kadulu]

sad stuff...maybe it goes with your name ..

no seriously..it has a reference to a lot of people i know..they're all waiting for their butterfly..and you hav carefully put the words in..nice stuff..keep writing

o.k...thanks...but all my poems re nt my personal experiences,they r imaginations.it is the poem..isn't it? thanks...

 

[kadulu]

Ops ganan ganna epa okzzz...... owa ohoma tha,,,,
mona karannada itin...

thanks..for the comment..but it s nt a personal experiance,just imagination...

 

[sherlock]

ha ha balagenai