sInThEtIc YaWwEnEyA.........

[LAPD]

lassnai bro, keep it up

 

[||~R_girl~||]

whooo awsm 1!!!! alrdy seen dz b4 hehe
i say u again u r beginin to becm poetic hehe
and nice PS work as well!

 

[rustyc]

aththamai.....me ape loke nennam .......
niyamai............

hmm...
aaath rupiyal satha welete yata une lokeyak...
kaasi kiipeyakete sathuta paya gaanate wikinene lokeyak...
aakai duka....

 

[crazy_girl]

Already seen ??????

 

[thm14]

ela machoo... keep writing

 

[Hiranchandima]

salliwalata oya pata pata lookeyak payakata 2kata thaniwenna puluwan,,,aka harima lassanai,,,hamadaama enna hithenawa,,,ehema enna hithenne thamange sabaa lokaya nathi karaganimin tamai,,,,,oya lassana lokee thaawa kalikai,,,
awasanaya................
thamange winasayai,
thamange pawle winasayai,
thamange sabaa lokaya winasayai.....nirmanayak washayen niyamai mchn,,,,keep it up

 

[rustyc]

lassnai

lassanai....

thanks

 

[rustyc]

wow

niyamai macho

thank you for da comments

 

[rustyc]

be strong..face life..this is the world we hv to live...

good point...
and thanks for da comment
but still many of us are not strong enuf

 

[rustyc]

hmm good ..dreams are forever just step aside and let the world go by lol

well its not da best thing to do
cuz da best way to be a looser is to step aside and watch da world go by

 

[fernandokasu]

harima lassane malliyo atthmae

 

[rustyc]

Isnt the hidden meaning is heroine??
M confused.. y these fellas tokin abt "lokayak"??

Anw, 1 of ya most wondrful n creativ poems iv seen ..
Nice !!
Well done !!

well you can take it as heroinne or as da society we live in
it applies to both
its just a matter of fact of in which angle you look at da poem

 

[rustyc]

salliwalata oya pata pata lookeyak payakata 2kata thaniwenna puluwan,,,aka harima lassanai,,,hamadaama enna hithenawa,,,ehema enna hithenne thamange sabaa lokaya nathi karaganimin tamai,,,,,oya lassana lokee thaawa kalikai,,,
awasanaya................
thamange winasayai,
thamange pawle winasayai,
thamange sabaa lokaya winasayai.....nirmanayak washayen niyamai mchn,,,,keep it up

macho mata podi sathutak thiyenewa

mokada mama poem ake liyala iwere wela kiyewwate passe mamath dakka aththeteme meke therum 2k thiyenewa nede kiyala....


ada methene kiyawepu ayagen kotasak ake therumak ,adahasak dakka,,,
anith aya anith ake dakka...

aththeteme ada apite wela thiyene de thamai oya
thawelaalike sathutak wenuwen ona deyak keranne api ada sudanam
ape aathmaye wikunanne unath ada godak aya pasubate wenne naa...


aake ehema wechche ake nam dukak...
aaath ake therum gaththe tika denek hari inne ake sathutak

 

[gayan kalhara]

i lyk the theam,,
but hv a prob
ape loke aththatama apita aiythida???

 

[Zeus]

mehemai...hamogema loka horu aran...api inne anunge .............system eka.....horu aran tiyenne manasa unique gatiya

Appa mara reply eka kolla anna hari machoo
mulu lokema ekama vidiyakata yanne aduma tarame tava sahenna kalekata passe rataval atarath venasak nathi veyi
Ayi ithin tiyenne Global village ekekne neda ? hihi
and also mekath kiyanna one umba kiyana vidiyata unique gathiya nathi unama machan samharavita "mamaya mageeya" kiyana hangemma nthi vennath puluvan ekath eka atakin hondayi

Tava deyak minissu drugs valata abbahi venne nara ashraya nisama neneyi stress eka
Duka kiyana devaluth hetu venava
Atta loke tiyena katuka bava saha atta loke nathi sundarathvaya sihina lokekin balaporottu venava
Samahara vita minissi HArry ppotter ta kamathi vennaththeth me nisa vennath puluvan

Antimatama kiyanna tiyenne mechcharayi
ME okkotama mula asahanaya

Nice creation Rusthyc man u hev engaged us to a great valuable and usefull discussion
Keep up man
These r the things to be discussed

 

[crazycombo]

maxaaa

 

[rustyc]

i lyk the theam,,
but hv a prob
ape loke aththatama apita aiythida???

hoda prashneyak

hithanne deyak

 

[crazy_girl]

hoda prashneyak

hithanne deyak

I like ya pix f new sigy.. but d poem !!

 

[twisted]

well its not da best thing to do
cuz da best way to be a looser is to step aside and watch da world go by

by the rates of this worlds going by i don't mind being a loser..


i see things like "we don't own this world ..it's stolen from us ..it's not real " all over and still not living up to those standards is ..being a loser lol

father your world is a lulzy place..