Sleep....

[gn.karunarathna]

This is my first poem... so comment it...

 

[gn.karunarathna]

cum on

 

[Santa]

hehe kinda funny...LOL..keep it up....

 

[gn.karunarathna]

thnx bro

 

[gn.karunarathna]

cum on

 

[archirasika]

as a begining, its good, more foucus is necessary for poem rhythem, rhyme and flow...think again about Ps. it should not disturb the poem...ohoma yamu....

 

[gn.karunarathna]

as a begining, its good, more foucus is necessary for poem rhythem, rhyme and flow...think again about Ps. it should not disturb the poem...ohoma yamu....

thnx mcn... i respect to your advices

 

[kitty***]

he he..........oya hari nidi kumbarayekne............

 

[gn.karunarathna]

he he..........oya hari nidi kumbarayekne............

aththetama ow halo....

 

[gn.karunarathna]

any 1

 

[LAPD]

palaweni eka hinda aulak na aiya, ps eka ganai poem eke flow eka ganai tawa hitanna

 

[gn.karunarathna]

palaweni eka hinda aulak na aiya, ps eka ganai poem eke flow eka ganai tawa hitanna

thnx for advice... i respect it...

 

[kitty***]

aththetama ow halo....

anyway good work.... next time LAPD malliya kiyapu de karannako....
wadiya nida gannat epa ithin...

 

[gn.karunarathna]

ayeth

 

[nirosh_nuwan]

MEKA LIWWE NIDI MATHEN NEDA?

 

[gn.karunarathna]

MEKA LIWWE NIDI MATHEN NEDA?

ow banz