Sorun (My own short story)

sameeralord · Jan 13, 2008

Hello everyone,

I'm new here. I live in Australia and went to the sinhala school there. I wrote this short story as a part of an assignment and teacher sent it to a local sinhala paper in Melbourne called "Tikiri". Tikiri is online as well. I just saw this section in the forum. So I thought I might as well put it here. Your comments would be very much appreciated.
Hope it is not GON

MCLINER · Jan 13, 2008

hey cool work bro..keep it up

isharackp · Jan 13, 2008

Welcome to Elakiri bro..
keep posting & keep up the good work... :yes:

Boman · Jan 13, 2008

Nicely written...Keep it up your talents n keep posting your writings..thanks

sriflipflop · Jan 13, 2008

I will read later and give comments

Ranhiru · Jan 13, 2008

WOW!! U r good machan!! Nice story! Keep up da good work and keep posting in EK!

chiraa · Jan 13, 2008

sameeralord said:
Hello everyone,

I'm new here. I live in Australia and went to the sinhala school there. I wrote this short story as a part of an assignment and teacher sent it to a local sinhala paper in Melbourne called "Tikiri". Tikiri is online as well. I just saw this section in the forum. So I thought I might as well put it here. Your comments would be very much appreciated.
Hope it is not GON

Wow. You got the talent bro! :yes:

It's not gon. It's ELAKIRI! :yes:

Keep writing and all the best. :yes:

anarkalee · Jan 13, 2008

milinda serasinghe · Jan 14, 2008

it's a good novel i like it verymuch

sameeralord · Jan 21, 2008

You guys are so supportive. Thanks heaps for everyone who replied to this topic

. I'm motivated to write more now

binu_rulz · Jan 21, 2008

sameeralord said:
You guys are so supportive. Thanks heaps for everyone who replied to this topic . I'm motivated to write more now

Oh yea man and Welcome to EK keep up da gud wrk we have our own resident Poets and Authors read Nikini's meedum Kandulu

moonlight · Jan 21, 2008

Yeah.. Its realy nyc... keep it up friend... & well come to Ek family

blackroses · Jan 21, 2008

wow........ itz coool............ lassanai machanz............ keep it up...............

Kalindugayan · Jan 21, 2008

god job

nEoN_wHitE · Jan 21, 2008

wow dis is seriously a gr8 story

weldone bro.. u got some talant..

u live in melbourne?? where??

Koombiya · Jan 21, 2008

Sameera>>
Ahamben Blacka ewuwa link ekakin meka kiyewuwe...
Kathawa lassanayi..

Meke kiyawena Kathandaraya Sameeragema creation ekakda? ehema nathnam folk story ekak wage ekak asurin liyapu ekakda?

anyway, Mamath mekata kamathiyi...
"Saba sorun sitinne apa thulamaya..." kiyana line eka hari niyamayi... eeken mulu text ekema aruth eka thanakata gannawa....!

Sameerege anik works balannath kamathiyi api...

Suba pathum...!

Clerk_Kent · Jan 21, 2008

Nicely done bro...as i think the name of the prince does not match srilanka..But very nice advice given..Very good..Keep up the good work... :yes:

sameeralord · Jan 29, 2008

Once again thank you so much for your support. I thank each and everyone who have replied to the topic. I very much apreciate the comments :yes:

. Thanks a lot

Now answer few questions

@binu_rulz: Thanks a lot for your comments

. Yeah I saw Nikini's story. If it was a short story I would have read and replied straight away. It is a novel so I will reply to her topic after I finish reading it. Would take some time!! :yes:

@Koombiya and Blackroses: Thanks a lot for your comments as well

. I should thank black roses for sending you the link too

. Atthatama kisima keti kattawak natthan jana kathawak asurin nemeyi mama meke kathawa liyuwe. Ee wunata meke dena paniwayade adahasa mata labune nisala wila kiyana potha kiyaweemen. Habai kathawanan mama liyuwa ekak. :rolleyes: