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felt too long and the poem lacked something to keep the readers interested in following til the last line..and it didn't sound very poetic more like a collection of lines...read a lot of english poems mate good luck.
Bro, this is the first & still the only one I ever wrote in English. So, there maybe some shortages. I also don't tell that it's a poetic one. But, I 'd like to sat is as a creative writing. But, I really meant about one thing from it. I wiil tell soon what I meant by it. Thanx a lot for your comments.
Bro, this is the first & still the only one I ever wrote in English. So, there maybe some shortages. I also don't tell that it's a poetic one. But, I 'd like to sat is as a creative writing. But, I really meant about one thing from it. I wiil tell soon what I meant by it. Thanx a lot for your comments.
this one thing is true about poetry...it's not the meaning that catches the eye of the reader in the first time ..so you have to present it in a readable, perceptible way with some nice words so the reader can grasp it
yeah start always suck ..keep writing you will definitely get much better.
