under the rain

[aye_sha90]

UNDER THE RAIN

It is ranin again
n people are walkin around me without any pain
what is the meaning of this nonsens rain?
does anyone knw wht is its name?
people come n go
without stopping n saying hello
But everyone has got a story
everyone hides that in the memory
everyone has a name
everyone has its pain
under this dark and hard rain
I'm always trying to understand their minds
but i have never found in them any signs
they walk and walk
wracked by this darkness, they can not stop
because the agony can not be cleaned with a soap
and the fear is too polluted to be moped
they are illuded opening their eyes
because they can not see the real light
the darkness is summit in their mind
but their soul cant be forever blind!



AYESHA

 

[sudheera]

elane

 

[ereshthush]

ela ela

 

[aye_sha90]

elane

thx

 

[aye_sha90]

ela ela

oh thx

 

[randula01]

GOOD..............

 

[aye_sha90]

GOOD..............

thx...but guys dnt knw if u undstood da meanin of ds ...

 

[Clerk_Kent]

Sha nice one....Nice creativity....

 

[aye_sha90]

Sha nice one....Nice creativity....

thnk uuu

 

[Clerk_Kent]

thx...but guys dnt knw if u undstood da meanin of ds ...

he he..yes a bit hard to understand....
that it is not of rain...but...

 

[Nash']

ummm.....nice...but u knw too heavy as in...it jz washes out da simplicity and the cuteness of a poem...
buh dere's such a category of poems too dat have explicit and hard to get meanings...
so if u tried that...den itz a really kewl one...as in lyk super kewl...
and i av ta say...i dint get da meanin evn.... dere! i was honest....
ummm....and u were too concentrated on rhyming it seems...cz den n dre u av made a few grammar errors....not a big deal though...
all n all wunnerful poem....kewl stf...keep up rytn...
and err....jz a suggestion...try to...lyk giv a lil clu here n dre or n da end f da poem...as n wat u r tryna say or wat u r tokn abt...
cheers!

 

[DIRTY X]

ammata siri...
maru ne...
ela ela nangi keep it up

 

[aye_sha90]

ummm.....nice...but u knw too heavy as in...it jz washes out da simplicity and the cuteness of a poem...
buh dere's such a category of poems too dat have explicit and hard to get meanings...
so if u tried that...den itz a really kewl one...as in lyk super kewl...
and i av ta say...i dint get da meanin evn.... dere! i was honest....
ummm....and u were too concentrated on rhyming it seems...cz den n dre u av made a few grammar errors....not a big deal though...
all n all wunnerful poem....kewl stf...keep up rytn...
and err....jz a suggestion...try to...lyk giv a lil clu here n dre or n da end f da poem...as n wat u r tryna say or wat u r tokn abt...
cheers!

hehe...yh..i've jst writnn ds..hvnt checkd it out...
i write many kind of poems,,ds is 1 actually writin poems in english iz nt da best fo me ..i prefer in italian nyway i've jst writtn ds..afta sum stuff which hapnd 2 me in thes dayz ds is wht i thnk abt da world..pplz mind..

 

[aye_sha90]

he he..yes a bit hard to understand....
that it is not of rain...but...

da rain is only a methaforr...lol....hehe..hard 2 explain,. daz da sad rain v liv in

 

[aye_sha90]

ammata siri...
maru ne...
ela ela nangi keep it up

thx ayyyya..mwaaaaaah

 

[ashan_ok]

wow!!...nice 1 sis....!!! kwl kwll...... oya marai ne

 

[aye_sha90]

wow!!...nice 1 sis....!!! kwl kwll...... oya marai ne

thx bro >

 

[Nash']

hehe...yh..i've jst writnn ds..hvnt checkd it out...
i write many kind of poems,,ds is 1 actually writin poems in english iz nt da best fo me ..i prefer in italian nyway i've jst writtn ds..afta sum stuff which hapnd 2 me in thes dayz ds is wht i thnk abt da world..pplz mind..

yaa yaa kewl scene....no tnks ..not italian plz...this one is lyk greek too for mee....
so wtz da implicit meaning of ur wrd RAIN?

 

[ashan_ok]

thx bro >

haha.......mee ochchara lassana eka pic ekakatath dalama dammanam neda maxxa!!

 

[sihini]

gr8 one dear, great