Walking all alone the road...

[pasansnoop]

You see me walking all alone this road
You see me with no mask on my face
You have your arms, ears and eyes
I've lost one since I was eight
I did my grade 5 with that one masked
I did my tests while tears flowing on papers

You see me walking all alone this road
You see with nobody to hold my hands
You have your family, love and liberty
I've lost my cousin bro since years
I went all this road with my strength
I went this far while you laugh

People dream about fancy cars
I dreamed I could see the world like you do
People think about getting promoted
When I am thinking of getting hired

People make plans on their free time
I struggle to survive in my home
Where two loud children fighting
While their little sister trying to save her life

You take selfies with your friends
I've lost my smile when I was 24
My students laughed when I say Antecedent
But they didn't knew about my antecedent

You can see me standing still
Even without my friends
Who claimed me as a brother of theirs
I just want to let them know that
A river won't dry up after a little drought

"That part of me left yesterday
The heart of me is strong today
No regrets I'm blessed to say
The old me dead and gone away"


- Pasan

 

[harindugamlath]

 

[DamN DoG]

"That part of me left yesterday
The heart of me is strong today
No regrets I'm blessed to say
The old me dead and gone away"

 

[සුදු පුතා]

you'll see others on the world,
you'll see the happiness on thire face,
but,
dont think, thire all are in success.
We all are in our own place..

dont expect help from others,
dont think I'm a disabled in the world,
dont care others feeling about you,
find a better path and try to go ahead,

never be unsatisfied,
never say your faults to others,
never give up your tries,
and make your own life....

suduputha.

(please be kind to skip any english language errors. this is my first try.)

 

[pasansnoop]

you'll see others on the world,
you'll see the happiness on thire face,
but,
dont think, thire all are in success.
We all are in our own place..

dont expect help from others,
dont think I'm a disabled in the world,
dont care others feeling about you,
find a better path and try to go ahead,

never be unsatisfied,
never say your faults to others,
never give up your tries,
and make your own life....

suduputha.

Great work machan..
thx for the reply

 

[twisted]

Glad to see some nice poem posted here good stuff bro, Keep writing.

Your simple words seem to have so much power in them

 

[maxboysl]

vump

 

[scurvy]

Guti kaala kadagatta dath set eka hadagena wage ponnaya.

 

[Prince of Darkness]

Hardly see these things in EK! good poem machan

 

[pasansnoop]

Glad to see some nice poem posted here good stuff bro, Keep writing.

Your simple words seem to have so much power in them

my first try bro..
and it's about me

thank you for the compliment

 

[pasansnoop]

Guti kaala kadagatta dath set eka hadagena wage ponnaya.

tama naha ban

Hardly see these things in EK! good poem machan

thank you machan

 

[twisted]

my first try bro..
and it's about me

thank you for the compliment

pretty good for a first try keep writing.

 

[scurvy]

pretty good for a first try keep writing.

Ahh poth kiyawana ponnaya.

 

[twisted]

Ahh poth kiyawana ponnaya.

You did not accept my challenge

 

[scurvy]

You did not accept my challenge

Ow ow umbe ammata daha parak hikuwa in one hour.

 

[twisted]

Ow ow umbe ammata daha parak hikuwa in one hour.

that's all well now kill a cat and post a pic here

 

[pasansnoop]

that's all well now kill a cat and post a pic here

Jabuk!

he can't even kill a mosquito with that Rambo knife

 

[pasansnoop]

bump