~ My first poem ~

[Ross Taylor]

oyatath ehenam kavi sithuwili pahala wunane yahaluwa...
gr8 poem... nice creation...
keep it up.

 

[Meeeharaka]

Yup..u're r8...
This is a race..wedr v like or nt v hav to run....
bt...I dn't no..v cn't change the system...

Nice creation bro...Keep it up.....

 

[Hayao]

Ane manda machan, mamath ohoma thamai.
Love gana hitanna gihin thamai studies kela vuneth.
aka nisa love gana hitana 1 amathaka karala tiyenne,
anyway nice poem with a different idea,
keep it up ur gud talent

Thanks bro!!!

ela! keep it up macho

Thanks bro!!

nice.. keep it up..

Thanks akka!

oyatath ehenam kavi sithuwili pahala wunane yahaluwa...
gr8 poem... nice creation...
keep it up.

He he..... anith aya liyanakota mamath itin liyanna hituna.

Thanks for da comment bro!!

 

[Hayao]

 

[kudos_utopia]

Wow nice Hayao

Wow ela....nice to c ya post poems!! Digatama post karanna bro

Poem eke godaakma kaleena arthayak thiyenne

Nice Hayao!

 

[Hayao]

Wow nice Hayao

Wow ela....nice to c ya post poems!! Digatama post karanna bro

Poem eke godaakma kaleena arthayak thiyenne

Nice Hayao!

Thanks kudos bro!

Oyalath poem hadana nisa mathath hituna poem ekak hadanna. E nisa meka post kare.

Thanks again!!

 

[kudos_utopia]

Mekata hodha word ekak thiyenawa...Japanese word ekak...something starting with K....mathaka nahane....oya prashnaya nisa (overworking) minissu dahas ganan marenawa avruddakata

 

[kudos_utopia]

Thanks kudos bro!

Oyalath poem hadana nisa mathath hituna poem ekak hadanna. E nisa meka post kare.

Thanks again!!

Elazz bro...yes...habai eka poem ekak dala nawathinna epa...digatmaa danna ona

Mata dan thawa ekak danna kammali kammali wage

Elazz.....all the best for your poetic future

 

[Hayao]

Mekata hodha word ekak thiyenawa...Japanese word ekak...something starting with K....mathaka nahane....oya prashnaya nisa (overworking) minissu dahas ganan marenawa avruddakata

Oh ehemada. Ow eka aththa. Ada hamoma mahansi wenne salli walatane. Anith ewa gana egollo hitanne ne.

Issarahata oka tawath wadi wenawa.

 

[nadun07]

is this ur 1st one?? ela..
a poem with a nice meaning
keep it up!!

 

[Hayao]

Elazz bro...yes...habai eka poem ekak dala nawathinna epa...digatmaa danna ona

Mata dan thawa ekak danna kammali kammali wage

Elazz.....all the best for your poetic future

No bro mama tawa poem ekak hadanne inne.

Ai oyage poem ekath kochchara lassanada.

E nisa tawa hadanna!

Okay thanks bro!

 

[Hayao]

is this ur 1st one?? ela..
a poem with a nice meaning
keep it up!!

Yes my first poem! Thanks a lot bro!!!

 

[Hayao]

Comments dapu hamotama thanks!

 

[malla]

maxxaa
keep it up..

 

[Hayao]

maxxaa
keep it up..

Thanks bro!!

 

[Suvin1122]

a nice poem..
thawa liyanna...all da best...

 

[Hayao]

a nice poem..
thawa liyanna...all da best...

Thanks a lot bro!!

 

[kumarasiri]

nice one bro!
keep it up macha...

 

[Hayao]

nice one bro!
keep it up macha...

Thanks a lot machan!

 

[Nalindax]

nice poem bro....Keep it up.....then you can be a grate poet....