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argan

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    ~Thanx Wewa ~

    it looks nice but hard to understand the first verse...and you might wanna change the title to restricted lives

    Thanx Dear!!,Ya,it mainly represents the people who r involved with drugs. Ohhh...plural form is lives ne :nerd:???....mata eka mathak une naane...eth mata hithuna mokak hari aulak thiyenawa wage.Thanx a gana kiwwata!!! :yes:
     

    twisted

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    Thanx Dear!!,Ya,it mainly represents the people who r involved with drugs. Ohhh...plural form is lives ne :nerd:???....mata eka mathak une naane...eth mata hithuna mokak hari aulak thiyenawa wage.Thanx a gana kiwwata!!! :yes:

    now that I know that its about drugs the poem makes much more sense..nice work :yes:
     

    twisted

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    Ya thts grt,but some of my friends feel that poem talks abt prostitutes also.but mainly talks abt drug addicted people. hey frend,is there a way to change the title of the thread? i haven't found it yet.

    yeah ..go advance on edit option :)

    well if your friends can see it that way, thats good too cos its always nice when different people can have different meanings to a poem...since in no where of this poem any straight clues to drug addiction are given, its safe to assume that this is about some self destructive behavior. :yes:
     

    argan

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    yeah ..go advance on edit option :)

    well if your friends can see it that way, thats good too cos its always nice when different people can have different meanings to a poem...since in no where of this poem any straight clues to drug addiction are given, its safe to assume that this is about some self destructive behavior. :yes:

    Ya,when i was writing this letter i haven't gt any specific idea in my mind.i'v just written it.after that i think the meaning of it.Thats why it gives different meanings to the reader.:yes:

    Ok,Thanx fr the all comments BRO!!!