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[Nalindax]

Wow a loong one

Kool......the ending of each sentence is musical....patta wachana



Meka sinduwakata harawanna puluwan!!!

Anjala give me the copyrights....

Hi kudos godak kalekata passe.....

ai gedarain pannala hitiyada.........

 

[kudos_utopia]

Hi kudos godak kalekata passe.....

ai gedarain pannala hitiyada.........

Ah nice to cya bro
Hehe naha naha.....PC eka use karalama kammali hithenawa .. ekai

 

[Nalindax]

Ah nice to cya bro
Hehe naha naha.....PC eka use karalama kammali hithenawa .. ekai

PC use karana eka nawaththala mokakda me dawas wala kare......
matanam PC eka naththyam mala wage thama.........

 

[Anjala_88]

Ah nice to cya bro
Hehe naha naha.....PC eka use karalama kammali hithenawa .. ekai

Ane matath ehema wenawanem.mata anith okkatama kammali kammali nati ekama wade eka

Wow a loong one

Kool......the ending of each sentence is musical....patta wachana



Meka sinduwakata harawanna puluwan!!!

Anjala give me the copyrights....

Thanks
he he sure KT u can have my copyrights
Habei mage nambuwa tiyanna

 

[Anjala_88]

PC use karana eka nawaththala mokakda me dawas wala kare......
matanam PC eka naththyam mala wage thama.........

same here noka nobi hitiyath lapa +Interent nati wunoth iwarai

 

[twisted]

it's really different...meaningful and cheering up. eventhough the rythm seemed to go out at the end. and honestly felt a bit too long..could have done without a few lines, the beautiful vagueness you seemed to retain within first 2 or 3 verses was lost on the last few which kinda ruined it for me...as a whole, its such a beautiful piece of work. nice.

 

[kudos_utopia]

Ane matath ehema wenawanem.mata anith okkatama kammali kammali nati ekama wade eka


Thanks
he he sure KT u can have my copyrights
Habei mage nambuwa tiyanna

hehehe oyath ude 9 am idan next day 2 am wenakan pc eka use karoth avrudu 2k yannai issella pc eka ussala polawe gahai (polawe gahanna issella oyage RAM card tika mata denna)

Hey thanks
Mama melody ekak dannam

 

[kudos_utopia]

it's really different...meaningful and cheering up. eventhough the rythm seemed to go out at the end. and honestly felt a bit too long..could have done without a few lines, the beautiful vagueness you seemed to retain within first 2 or 3 verses was lost on the last few which kinda ruined it for me...as a whole, its such a beautiful piece of work. nice.

hey hi bro

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[kudos_utopia]

PC use karana eka nawaththala mokakda me dawas wala kare......
matanam PC eka naththyam mala wage thama.........

matath ekalaye ehama thamai bro eth dan amarui PC eka laga inna

 

[Nalindax]

hehehe oyath ude 9 am idan next day 2 am wenakan pc eka use karoth avrudu 2k yannai issella pc eka ussala polawe gahai (polawe gahanna issella oyage RAM card tika mata denna)

Hey thanks
Mama melody ekak dannam

Polowe gahanna epa....wisik karanna mama dannawa hoda thanak wisik karanna mata denna mama wisik kaeannam.....

 

[Anjala_88]

it's really different...meaningful and cheering up. eventhough the rythm seemed to go out at the end. and honestly felt a bit too long..could have done without a few lines, the beautiful vagueness you seemed to retain within first 2 or 3 verses was lost on the last few which kinda ruined it for me...as a whole, its such a beautiful piece of work. nice.

he he
Thanks for ur comment bro , u got it right i was totally lost while writing thz. n thz is my new creation aftr a 1 yr back i feel like i lost my talent I can't put my imaginations in to lyrics as i wish nw whnevr i am trying its end up with a strange style. (I write thz 2days b4 n the original one is more longer than thz bt i cut some of parts.may be the real meaning lost cz of it)

 

[twisted]

hey hi bro

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why, thank you

i think i already have a job at movie bashing

 

[Nalindax]

matath ekalaye ehama thamai bro eth dan amarui PC eka laga inna

Ai studies ekka amaruda.......matath okama thiyenawa...... exam ekak repet set wenakan ithin mehemmama yanawa.......

 

[twisted]

he he
Thanks for ur comment bro , u got it right i was totally lost while writing thz. n thz is my new creation aftr a 1 yr back i feel like i lost my talent I can't put my imaginations in to lyrics as i wish nw whnevr i am trying its end up with a strange style. (I write thz 2days b4 n the original one is more longer than thz bt i cut some of parts.may be the real meaning lost cz of it)

you are welcome.

and yeah that kinda happens...i felt like i can't write anymore as well when i wrote that english poem after 9 months..but just keep writing you will acquire it back ..and keep writing so your style will evolve and don't pay much attention to meaning first cos you gta get the rythm and wording right most of all.

 

[Anjala_88]

hehehe oyath ude 9 am idan next day 2 am wenakan pc eka use karoth avrudu 2k yannai issella pc eka ussala polawe gahai (polawe gahanna issella oyage RAM card tika mata denna)

Hey thanks
Mama melody ekak dannam

Haha mama echchara wela inne na padam karannat epai.habei danatamat deadline awilla tiyene lagadima lapa polowe gahai ekko ADSL disconnect karai .

Polowe gahanna epa....wisik karanna mama dannawa hoda thanak wisik karanna mata denna mama wisik kaeannam.....

Smart Brain btw mama ita wada hoda tanak dannawa oya eyagen aran mata denna

 

[kudos_utopia]

Polowe gahanna epa....wisik karanna mama dannawa hoda thanak wisik karanna mata denna mama wisik kaeannam.....

 

[DiGiTaL_ACE]

thnx... goodak prayoojanawath mata...

 

[kudos_utopia]

Ai studies ekka amaruda.......matath okama thiyenawa...... exam ekak repet set wenakan ithin mehemmama yanawa.......

naha naha aiye

mamanam exams lang wenakotama thamai wadiyenma pc eka use karanne

dan mama monawath karanne naha...I mean u know....PC eka avrudu 12k 15k use karama amaru nadda

 

[Nalindax]

Haha mama echchara wela inne na padam karannat epai.habei danatamat deadline awilla tiyene lagadima lapa polowe gahai ekko ADSL disconnect karai .


Smart Brain btw mama ita wada hoda tanak dannawa oya eyagen aran mata denna

ehema ba oya electric badu hama thanama danna ba...ewa hariyata disposal karanna oni...naththam hoda na.....

 

[Anjala_88]

thnx... goodak prayoojanawath mata...

Welcome Bro