මලින් මලට

[#madhu#]

 

[amila_90210]

Not 100% true sis..nice PS work n really nicely written but
බඹරු මල්...කවියන්ට පාදක වෙච්ච නිමිති වුනාට සැබෑ ලෝකෙ ඔයිට වඩා වෙනස්...හැම මලම හැම බඹරාම ඔය කියන සන්සිද්ධිය පාදක කරගන්නේ නෑ

 

[thathsara.sl]

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[amila_90210]

penne netho

monawada?

 

[twisted]

monawada?

kalin photo eka load une nehe dan penawa

 

[amila_90210]

kalin photo eka load une nehe dan penawa

ekada mata penuna

 

[twisted]

as for the poem, it looks like an intended pun at society ..good writing i should say.

 

[twisted]

ekada mata penuna

wut

 

[Wali Kukula]

Madu Nama wagema oyage song ekath lassanai

 

[Wolverine GTR]

Lassanai!!!!!!!

 

[SRI LANKA]

Madu Nama wagema oyage song ekath lassanai

sirawatama wali kukulek.

 

[amila_90210]

sirawatama wali kukulek.

lol mama dakka dolytath oya kathawa kiyala thiyanwa

 

[coolioWiZ]

lassana kaviyak, tikak gamburen balanakota therumak thiyanawa . . .

as for the poem, it looks like an intended pun at society ..good writing i should say.

agreed bro, it looks like a pun, a pun intended with a softsense, soft like a flower itself, it doesn't hit hard coz of the linking with flowers and abstract nature, but surely anyone can get the point

 

[sridas]

Hmmmmm atthakuth tiyanawa

 

[Doly]

Nice creation sis

 

[amila_banks]

Perfect mchn

 

[KHz]

ලස්සන නිර්මාණයක්

 

[coolnishan]

Good

 

[twisted]

agreed bro, it looks like a pun, a pun intended with a softsense, soft like a flower itself, it doesn't hit hard coz of the linking with flowers and abstract nature, but surely anyone can get the point

we do like abstract poems now don't we and yes point is made yet hardly acceptable for me..not everybody does what the poet intends in the poem

 

[malinrock]

niyamai