හමුවුණා මට තිතක්......

[NoWayOut]

me wage wate karakila, hembath wela nathara wenna hithenne jeewitheta aramunak labunama. e aramuna adaraya wenna puluwan wena deyak wennath puluwan. obe paththen mokak hithala liwwath, meka honda nirmanayak. wachana witharak neme, wachana pelagaswala thiyana nawum ratawath kaviye agaya wadi karanawa. asi disi kaviyak. meka dakinakota mathak wenne Sekara ge kavi.

mama dakka keepa denekma me thitha mokadda kiyala hithanna uthsaha karala thiyanawa. e athinuth oba itha sarthakay. ada kalaye boho kavi wala mathupitin apita danena arthayata wada wadi yamak ne. hama dema sarala wela, geethayak, natyayak, onama kala nirmanayak gaththoth ada janapriya wenne mathupita opaya thiyana ewa misak gamburak thiyana ewa nemey. ithin sahodaraya, obage kavi keepayakinma wenas gamanak yana apuru pudgalayek mathu wee penenawa. subha gaman.

 

[nwnbs]

මේ දවස් වල කරන්නෙ අමුතුම නිර්මාණ...ඒත් ලස්සනයි සහෝ ඒ හැම එකක්ම...දැන් ඔය තිත තිව්වේ කව්ද?

 

[Kasmadumala]

sirada.parana kathawakda...suba pethum denna puluwanda.....:roleyes:

 

[TearDrop]

I like the vague description and the style you present the poem. It is very creative indeed.
The “Full stop” is vague to me as has been to all the others who read it. It sounds almost like you have seen a light at the end of the tunnel.
Absolutely brilliant! Well done!

 

[ronsilva]

නිර්මානය හරිම නිර්මානාත්මකයි...

අලුත් දෙයක් නිර්මානයෙන් ඉඟි කර ඇති බවකුයි මට නම් හැඟෙන්නේ...

තිතෙන් පසු ජීවිතයට නව ප්‍රවිශ්ඨයක් ලබා ගන්න හදනවා වගේ...

උඹට ජය!!

 

[Deelaka]

harima nirmanaathmaka nirmanayak....
bohoma apoorui.

 

[aravindalj]

me wage wate karakila, hembath wela nathara wenna hithenne jeewitheta aramunak labunama. e aramuna adaraya wenna puluwan wena deyak wennath puluwan. obe paththen mokak hithala liwwath, meka honda nirmanayak. wachana witharak neme, wachana pelagaswala thiyana nawum ratawath kaviye agaya wadi karanawa. asi disi kaviyak. meka dakinakota mathak wenne Sekara ge kavi.

mama dakka keepa denekma me thitha mokadda kiyala hithanna uthsaha karala thiyanawa. e athinuth oba itha sarthakay. ada kalaye boho kavi wala mathupitin apita danena arthayata wada wadi yamak ne. hama dema sarala wela, geethayak, natyayak, onama kala nirmanayak gaththoth ada janapriya wenne mathupita opaya thiyana ewa misak gamburak thiyana ewa nemey. ithin sahodaraya, obage kavi keepayakinma wenas gamanak yana apuru pudgalayek mathu wee penenawa. subha gaman.

thankx dude