northtech

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  • Oct 26, 2006
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    Where U want me to be


    (my first attempt on sumthin like this)
    Kill, kill me
    as I am unborn.
    Yes, abort me
    as if I am not yours. Don't let me come,
    don't let me see the wrold,
    don't let me call you my mother,
    just because i have not been
    accepted by my so called father. But mother, I am not his part,
    I am breathing in your womb.
    I'll be the reflection of your soul,
    I'll first land up in your arms for sure. I want to be your support Ma!
    I want to fight this combat.
    I am surviving from last three months,
    I have seen so much from your eyes rather. You use to talk to me for long hours,
    telling me that my father don't need me.
    I want to see who can be this cruel,
    to the god's angel, an innocent baby, a girl. But you are limping towards the operation theatre,
    ignoring my heart that's beating so strangely inside you.
    Unknowingly you are dragging me to the orphanage of god,
    over-hearding my promise to be with you and support you forver.
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    blackroses

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    hmmm..... sumthin interest......

    there are log of variations in abortion......

    your creation is supereb,.....

    other time, try to be add sum graphics.......... :)
     

    korn

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    northtech said:


    (my first attempt on sumthin like this)
    Kill, kill me
    as I am unborn.
    Yes, abort me
    as if I am not yours. Don't let me come,
    don't let me see the wrold,
    don't let me call you my mother,
    just because i have not been
    accepted by my so called father. But mother, I am not his part,
    I am breathing in your womb.
    I'll be the reflection of your soul,
    I'll first land up in your arms for sure. I want to be your support Ma!
    I want to fight this combat.
    I am surviving from last three months,
    I have seen so much from your eyes rather. You use to talk to me for long hours,
    telling me that my father don't need me.
    I want to see who can be this cruel,
    to the god's angel, an innocent baby, a girl. But you are limping towards the operation theatre,
    ignoring my heart that's beating so strangely inside you.
    Unknowingly you are dragging me to the orphanage of god,
    over-hearding my promise to be with you and support you forver.
    ============ ========= ========= =

    ya gud topic macha....i too had couple of songs written about this... nice one keep it up!!!
     

    Doly

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    You knw..................i want to say lot of about this poem...but its just made me Spechless..........
    tell me dear who wrote this? you?

    becoz its really really SUPERB..............JUST SUPERB