ahimi uu unuhuma...!!!

rustyc

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friends...
these is ma 1st creation in ma whole life...
well i'm not a poet...
nor a free verse writer...

so there might be tons of mistakes in this creation...


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thanks nad253




ahimiuuunuhumagd4.jpg

thanks gayan kalhara



Special thank to gayan kalhara and nad253 for helping with da back ground and da fonts...
and thanks sachii for your work with typing
and most of all i must thank crazy_girl for helping me with this creation...


finally i would like to dedicate this creation to ma ammi...
i wrote this in memory of ma ammi who past away exactly 1 year before today...
26-12-2007...



nad253 & gayan kalhara...
you two might get da idea why i had such a hurry to get this done so soon and perfect...
thanks again
 
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hey nad and gayan kalhara...
sorry i had to make da both of oyu waste ya time...

well i was not sure wether i cud get this in time before 26th is over...
please 4gv me...
read da reason
you will understand me
 

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Machan... Ammage Unusuma nethi Unoth Thamai Apita e Unusume thibuna suwaya wedipurama denenne... Amma....E gena... E Adaraya Gena... E senehasa Gena.. Kochchara liyuwath hithata danena sankawa... Thanikama...Paluwa nethiwenne ne machan... Mage Amma...Thaththath Mata nehe Machan.. Dennama Mawa Thani karala Gihin... Eth e senehasa thawamath Hithe Thiyenawa... Thank you Machan..Aye Ayeth E senehasa mathak wenawa me wage Kaviyakin... Machan Me lowen Samugena Adata Aurudu 01 Gathawena Umbe Ammata...Shanthiyakma Lebenna Kiyala Prarthana Karanawa.....
 

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mchn excellent bro...really heart touching,,,mata siraawata kadulu enna awa meka kiyawanakota,,,sorry about ur amma...meka amuthu lookayak mchn apita labena nolabena deewal theeranaya karanne kawada kiyala apitawath hithaganna ba,,,a dee sidda wenakan api danneth na..duk wenna epa mchn ...mama dannawa duka ammage aduwa me loke kisima kenekuta purawanna ba,,,,oyage amma kohe hitiyath sathutu wenawa athi mchnz uba wage puthek bihikalata...hodata egena ganna amma wenuwen karanna puluwan hodama dee aka tamai...mchnz digatama liyanna u'v got the ability,,,,mchn uba 4toshop dannawada ahuwe mekata neda? sorry mchnz mata hawasa enna bari una online,,,man karath me tharan lassanata ena 1k na,,,meka hari lassnata karala thiyanawa...sorry mchn mata help karanna bari unata:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
 

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    wick321 said:
    Machan... Ammage Unusuma nethi Unoth Thamai Apita e Unusume thibuna suwaya wedipurama denenne... Amma....E gena... E Adaraya Gena... E senehasa Gena.. Kochchara liyuwath hithata danena sankawa... Thanikama...Paluwa nethiwenne ne machan... Mage Amma...Thaththath Mata nehe Machan.. Dennama Mawa Thani karala Gihin... Eth e senehasa thawamath Hithe Thiyenawa... Thank you Machan..Aye Ayeth E senehasa mathak wenawa me wage Kaviyakin... Machan Me lowen Samugena Adata Aurudu 01 Gathawena Umbe Ammata...Shanthiyakma Lebenna Kiyala Prarthana Karanawa.....


    macahan ape loke hamoma anga sampurna minissu ne bun,so ape ayata kochara dewala hambawunath,kochara sapa sampath tibbath,apema amma tathta nattan ape hithe loku sankawaki tyenawa tama,eth machan athi wena hama deyakima koi welawaka hary nathiwenawa,eka lokadaramaya,,,

    ATHI WENA SAMA DEMA NATHI WENAWA
    NATHI WEEMA THULIN DUKA ATHI WENAWAAAA

    buduhamuduruwo deshana karala tyenawane machan,,,

    owa wadiya hithanna epa...
    kohoma wunath man mehema kuwath tamanta hithe tyena sankawa tamanma tama danneeeeee,,,


    ogollange demapiyanta hoda athmabawayaki danatamath labila attteeeeee


    budu saranai ogolla hama denatama

    attatama mata me kaviya kiyawanakota mata as walata kadulaki awa

    e mage hithata danuna widiya machan
     

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    rustyc said:
    hey nad and gayan kalhara...
    sorry i had to make da both of oyu waste ya time...

    well i was not sure wether i cud get this in time before 26th is over...
    please 4gv me...
    read da reason
    you will understand me

    no bro .... dont worry ...... its ok ... :)
    nice one .. its really sad ........:( :(

    jivithe hati ohoma thamai :( :(
     

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    DJANURADHA@mp3 said:
    macahan ape loke hamoma anga sampurna minissu ne bun,so ape ayata kochara dewala hambawunath,kochara sapa sampath tibbath,apema amma tathta nattan ape hithe loku sankawaki tyenawa tama,eth machan athi wena hama deyakima koi welawaka hary nathiwenawa,eka lokadaramaya,,,

    ATHI WENA SAMA DEMA NATHI WENAWA
    NATHI WEEMA THULIN DUKA ATHI WENAWAAAA

    buduhamuduruwo deshana karala tyenawane machan,,,

    owa wadiya hithanna epa...
    kohoma wunath man mehema kuwath tamanta hithe tyena sankawa tamanma tama danneeeeee,,,


    ogollange demapiyanta hoda athmabawayaki danatamath labila attteeeeee


    budu saranai ogolla hama denatama

    attatama mata me kaviya kiyawanakota mata as walata kadulaki awa

    e mage hithata danuna widiya machan

    Thanks Machan...Machan Mata Monawa labunath Amma nethi Paluwa makenne nehe...Machan...Mage wife Mata Amma wagema Adaren Innawa..Eth Hithata danena Amma...Thaththa.. Kiyana Hangeema...Bendeema...Wena Katawath Makanna.. Labadenna bahe machan... Any way Thank Lot again.
     

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    wick321 said:
    Machan... Ammage Unusuma nethi Unoth Thamai Apita e Unusume thibuna suwaya wedipurama denenne... Amma....E gena... E Adaraya Gena... E senehasa Gena.. Kochchara liyuwath hithata danena sankawa... Thanikama...Paluwa nethiwenne ne machan... Mage Amma...Thaththath Mata nehe Machan.. Dennama Mawa Thani karala Gihin... Eth e senehasa thawamath Hithe Thiyenawa... Thank you Machan..Aye Ayeth E senehasa mathak wenawa me wage Kaviyakin... Machan Me lowen Samugena Adata Aurudu 01 Gathawena Umbe Ammata...Shanthiyakma Lebenna Kiyala Prarthana Karanawa.....
    ammi thathai nathi paduwe,paluwe kawadawath makenne naa ban marenekan....
    mokada mea loke kisi kenekute aa aya tharam kapewimak keranne baa....
    ake therenekota mama parakkui........
    mata dan therenewa mata nathi une kochchere watina deyakda kiyala...
    aath ammi hitepu kaale mata oka therunaa nam......:dull::nerd::sorry:


    kisi kenekuta baa aa tharam awadanayak,kapawimak,adarayak denne...
    :sorry::sorry:
     

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    Hiranchandima said:
    mchn excellent bro...really heart touching,,,mata siraawata kadulu enna awa meka kiyawanakota,,,sorry about ur amma...meka amuthu lookayak mchn apita labena nolabena deewal theeranaya karanne kawada kiyala apitawath hithaganna ba,,,a dee sidda wenakan api danneth na..duk wenna epa mchn ...mama dannawa duka ammage aduwa me loke kisima kenekuta purawanna ba,,,,oyage amma kohe hitiyath sathutu wenawa athi mchnz uba wage puthek bihikalata...hodata egena ganna amma wenuwen karanna puluwan hodama dee aka tamai...mchnz digatama liyanna u'v got the ability,,,,mchn uba 4toshop dannawada ahuwe mekata neda? sorry mchnz mata hawasa enna bari una online,,,man karath me tharan lassanata ena 1k na,,,meka hari lassnata karala thiyanawa...sorry mchn mata help karanna bari unata:( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
    :(:(
    thanks for da compliment macho...

    and thanks for da comforting words too...

    this is da worst xmas of ma life:(:(


    anw awlak naa ban kohomahari wadea kerunane...
    ilage paara ubete dennamkooo;)
     

    rustyc

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    DJANURADHA@mp3 said:
    macahan ape loke hamoma anga sampurna minissu ne bun,so ape ayata kochara dewala hambawunath,kochara sapa sampath tibbath,apema amma tathta nattan ape hithe loku sankawaki tyenawa tama,eth machan athi wena hama deyakima koi welawaka hary nathiwenawa,eka lokadaramaya,,,

    ATHI WENA SAMA DEMA NATHI WENAWA
    NATHI WEEMA THULIN DUKA ATHI WENAWAAAA


    buduhamuduruwo deshana karala tyenawane machan,,,

    owa wadiya hithanna epa...
    kohoma wunath man mehema kuwath tamanta hithe tyena sankawa tamanma tama danneeeeee,,,


    ogollange demapiyanta hoda athmabawayaki danatamath labila attteeeeee


    budu saranai ogolla hama denatama

    attatama mata me kaviya kiyawanakota mata as walata kadulaki awa

    e mage hithata danuna widiya machan
    hmm...
    oya highlight kerepu tika kochchere danagaththath ake therum gaththath hithete ene hagima nawaththe ganne baa ban:(:(


    wadipurama oke wenewa thaniyen hitiyama...
    thanks for da comment on ma poem....