ahimi uu unuhuma...!!!

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Nice 1 hun.. keep it up ya gud wrk n write more..

i knw dat no1 can cum to ammi's plc n fill it.. but atlest can try nah.. try to b happy.. i knw its hard.. bt try.. Anw, i dun wanna tok abt ammi anymo.. :(
Btw, d creation is creativ ;)
 

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crazy_girl said:
Nice 1 hun.. keep it up ya gud wrk n write more..

i knw dat no1 can cum to ammi's plc n fill it.. but atlest can try nah.. try to b happy.. i knw its hard.. bt try.. Anw, i dun wanna tok abt ammi anymo.. :(
Btw, d creation is creativ ;)
mmmmmmmmwha:love::love:
thanks hun
after all it will never be a sucsess if not for ya help
:):):)
 
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DJANURADHA@mp3 said:
macahan ape loke hamoma anga sampurna minissu ne bun,so ape ayata kochara dewala hambawunath,kochara sapa sampath tibbath,apema amma tathta nattan ape hithe loku sankawaki tyenawa tama,eth machan athi wena hama deyakima koi welawaka hary nathiwenawa,eka lokadaramaya,,,

ATHI WENA SAMA DEMA NATHI WENAWA
NATHI WEEMA THULIN DUKA ATHI WENAWAAAA

buduhamuduruwo deshana karala tyenawane machan,,,

owa wadiya hithanna epa...
kohoma wunath man mehema kuwath tamanta hithe tyena sankawa tamanma tama danneeeeee,,,


ogollange demapiyanta hoda athmabawayaki danatamath labila attteeeeee


budu saranai ogolla hama denatama

attatama mata me kaviya kiyawanakota mata as walata kadulaki awa

e mage hithata danuna widiya machan
mara sad
 

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    Niyamayi machan man mulin hituve mekath bolanda adara kaviyak vennathi kiyala
    me vage hamoma tamange GF la BF la gana apita(mata) epaaaaaaaaaaaaaa venakamma poems liyana kale

    Apiva me venakam hada gattu parents la ganath kaviyak dekak hari dakinna labena eka kochchara deyakda

    Really nice poem pal
    Keep it up and proceed to ur second poem :D
     

    rustyc

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    Zeus said:
    Niyamayi machan man mulin hituve mekath bolanda adara kaviyak vennathi kiyala
    me vage hamoma tamange GF la BF la gana apita(mata) epaaaaaaaaaaaaaa venakamma poems liyana kale

    Apiva me venakam hada gattu parents la ganath kaviyak dekak hari dakinna labena eka kochchara deyakda

    Really nice poem pal
    Keep it up and proceed to ur second poem :D
    thanks for da comment kollo:)
    but im not really sure wether i'l write a 2nd...
    m not a pro or nor am i in to long term poetry...
     

    dishi91

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    NY
    its really heart touching....
    n its great.....
    really sry abt u r mom bro.....
    bt she will b proud of u .....coz this creation is GREAT!!!!!:)