any amature rappers out there

[RAT 16F88]

man I'm new to rap game I feels like gotta bit ability
here's a my crap work
you also cn comment and upload
common real relators out
http://rapidshare.com/files/417845522/sanit55.mp3

 

[kasun.madhusanka]

you got talent man.. keep it up.. consider bout pronouncing and lyrics..
and also flow... holla bk..

 

[RAT 16F88]

thnx a lot senior
keep me giving & showing my defects
thanks again