twisted said:nice poem..you are getting better you know keep writing good luck
it's written about a common theme in the common way though ..keep writing

rustyc said:meaning ful hun...
nice
keep it up
"brave sons we salute thee...
brave sons we worship thee..."
i like dat part

crazy_girl said:Actually i wrote it coz our army captured alimankada..
Btw, thx!


ram4mira said:This is also a very gud 1....Poems kiyawanawamai...he he...Any wy u hav a creative mind!!!
And Salute to Our Heroes!!

Hiranchandima said:hats off for our army!!!btw wow ur very creative nangz...keep it up!!!!![]()
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ayenum mawa me widihata amaruwe danna epaa![]()