can't think of a title

[jamiezue]

your wishes are granted

walk on softly through the fields
where, dreamlessly, I lie
the lilies of yesterday
let it not yield
let them die
when my eyes are peeled
make them blind
let them not catch a glimpse
of your haunting stride
when all light is gone
shed not your resonating light
out of the depths I could find
a penetrative ray of sunshine
let not a word pass your lips
but a joyful smile
the apple of my eye..

හිතාගන්න බැහැ කොහොමද ඇපල් ගෙඩියක් ඇහැට ගියේ කියලා

 

[twisted]

හිතාගන්න බැහැ කොහොමද ඇපල් ගෙඩියක් ඇහැට ගියේ කියලා

that's easy you take an apple (a green one is ideal for this) and you just... well I don't think you are ready for this

 

[Elysium]

your wishes are granted

walk on softly through the fields
where, dreamlessly, I lie
the lilies of yesterday
let it not yield
let them die
when my eyes are peeled
make them blind
let them not catch a glimpse
of your haunting stride
when all light is gone
shed not your resonating light
out of the depths I could find
a penetrative ray of sunshine
let not a word pass your lips
but a joyful smile
the apple of my eye..

Na ekko one na Thanks btw

 

[jamiezue]

ඇත්තටම මේක තේරුම් ගන්න අමාරුයි නෙ. කරුනාකර තේරුම් ගත් කෙනෙක් විචාරයක් සපයනු මැනවිමේ කියන්නේ කා ගැනද...

 

[twisted]

Na ekko one na Thanks btw

beware what you wish for

ඇත්තටම මේක තේරුම් ගන්න අමාරුයි නෙ. කරුනාකර තේරුම් ගත් කෙනෙක් විචාරයක් සපයනු මැනවිමේ කියන්නේ කා ගැනද...

forget it ..just ramblings of a madman

 

[Elysium]

beware what you wish for

Dup loku line Aaye illane na

 

[twisted]

Dup loku line Aaye illane na

it was an honest and burning feeling that I turned into a poem

 

[jamiezue]

I'm really curious about this poem as it's getting harder to understand. The lines are contradictory to each other when i'm thinking I'm about to get a meaning out of it. who can possibly have a haunting stride? i don't know!

 

[twisted]

I'm really curious about this poem as it's getting harder to understand. The lines are contradictory to each other when i'm thinking I'm about to get a meaning out of it. who can possibly have a haunting stride? i don't know!

a ghost?

 

[jamiezue]

a ghost?

exactly!.. But they don't walk soft or don't give joyful smiles...

 

[twisted]

exactly!.. But they don't walk soft or don't give joyful smiles...

have you ever seen a ghost? are you sure? it may be for dead memories that refuse to stay buried..

it stinks when you bury stuff and they come back from dead

 

[jamiezue]

have you ever seen a ghost? are you sure? it may be for dead memories that refuse to stay buried..

it stinks when you bury stuff and they come back from dead

lost love then

 

[twisted]

lost love then

hmm I dunno..

 

[D@sun]

 

[coefficient]

matath puluwanne yako o wage melo therumak nathi ekak liyanna, me wage.

me balahalla, maath ekak liwwoooo


winter throughout of the sun keeps crimson woods softy dark....
seamless shattered memories fall thought the dead rising...
silent hill brings the grey clouds to the beneath the heaven of my lost angel.... the duty of call....
keep, keep but not slow...
help....
speed for a need....

 

[twisted]

matath puluwanne yako o wage melo therumak nathi ekak liyanna, me wage.

me balahalla, maath ekak liwwoooo


winter throughout of the sun keeps crimson woods softy dark....
seamless shattered memories fall thought the dead rising...
silent hill brings the grey clouds to the beneath the heaven of my lost angel.... the duty of call....
keep, keep but not slow...
help....
speed for a need....

I see what you did there nice though

 

[yakshaya]

matath puluwanne yako o wage melo therumak nathi ekak liyanna, me wage.

me balahalla, maath ekak liwwoooo


winter throughout of the sun keeps crimson woods softy dark....
seamless shattered memories fall thought the dead rising...
silent hill brings the grey clouds to the beneath the heaven of my lost angel.... the duty of call....
keep, keep but not slow...
help....
speed for a need....

hadissi bokak set wechcha seen ekak neda

 

[yakshaya]

apple of my blind eyes....

 

[twisted]

hadissi bokak set wechcha seen ekak neda

the idea is quite poetic

apple of my blind eyes....

blind my eyes

 

[coefficient]

hadissi bokak set wechcha seen ekak neda

lol. wenna puluwan

the idea is quite poetic

from the 'idea' u meant how its created? yeah bunch of words with bunch of game titles as u already know

so its just a random words bonded together.

and it feels like there is something there , but there is nothing.
its just random words.

if im gonna read it and try to understand what the hell i wrote, it gives me a headache. so i dont read dat