Finally I found u... but....

[pamithK]

a reply

Now u call my name..
with tearful eyes..
but where were u?
till all my tears dried up?
till my heart tore into pieces?

you love for me was never worth..
so i found the enchanting love..
that u promised..
and just like the thunder roaring..
you are late..
for my heart is now filled..
with the brightness..

 

[Samanali]

Very nice poem

 

[nikini]

I wanted to share my joy
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I wanted to cry for my sorrow
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I wanted to talk with someone
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I wanted to get rid of the loneliness
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I looked for u everywhere
I shouted “Where are u my love?”
Then I heard ur voice saying,
“I’m so far from u here with my love...”

sooooo romantic...sensitive...heartwarming...& beautiful...Keep up the writting dear...

 

[malkavi]

apooo ow katada danne na....
oiii kiwwe friendship ekata Oiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.......

Eka mama dannawa oiii.................

 

[virajvithanage]

wooow!! maaaarai!

 

[bds]

Now u call my name..
with tearful eyes..
but where were u?
till all my tears dried up?
till my heart tore into pieces?

you love for me was never worth..
so i found the enchanting love..
that u promised..
and just like the thunder roaring..
you are late..
for my heart is now filled..
with the brightness..

I dont ever expect an answer like this... But its nice bro...

 

[bds]

Very nice poem

Thanx sis...

 

[bds]

sooooo romantic...sensitive...heartwarming...& beautiful...Keep up the writting dear...

Thanxxx akki...

 

[bds]

wooow!! maaaarai!

Thanxx..

 

[pamithK]

I dont ever expect an answer like this... But its nice bro...

ok but thanx..

and a good job too
welcome back too..

i'm still new here so i dont really know many poets here exept for

nikini akka, sunshine, akila and neroshan.. so its good to have u back

 

[bds]

ok but thanx..

and a good job too
welcome back too..

i'm still new here so i dont really know many poets here exept for

nikini akka, sunshine, akila and neroshan.. so its good to have u back

Welcome bro... & Thanxx..

 

[Cybrother]

I wanted to share my joy
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I wanted to cry for my sorrow
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I wanted to talk with someone
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I wanted to get rid of the loneliness
So, I came to u.. but u wasn’t there
I looked for u here & there
Then I realized u have gone somewhere

I looked for u everywhere
I shouted “Where are u my love?”
Then I heard ur voice saying,
“I’m so far from u here with my love...”

Nice impressions...........Good....

 

[bds]

Nice impressions...........Good....

Thanx..

 

[vj3660]

NICE POem

Really i had same experience ........ But She's my best friend..Now not any more..

 

[G.R.E.A]

really nice sis!!!

 

[KishanW]

Just read my signature bottom part, thats the answer for life...

 

[bds]

Really i had same experience ........ But She's my best friend..Now not any more..

Thanx bro.. Welcome to Elakiri...

 

[bds]

really nice sis!!!

Thanx sis...

 

[bds]

Just read my signature bottom part, thats the answer for life...

 

[Lich]

Nothings forgotten ,,, Nothings Ever Forgotten.. nice wording