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    this has got to be one of the 'meaningful' ones i have written..and it seems this is ravi ayya's best graphic..so this is big!! hope you enjoy it..please leave your comments:D :D
     

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    dahasa ganan minisun maha maga maratheee
    kali kadi ath pa wana see vatatheee
    maha maga yanena apahata ee duka danethee
    maduru thula unge sith madurak nomathee

    iiye sidu wuu bomba pipirima nisa ati uu kampanaya nsa liwwa ekak wenna onee..

    maha maga ,bus rathayee ehata mehata yana api wage ayata koi welawe bomba wadila marenna weida danne naa.eka nisa apita danenawa ee baya..ee duka,,
    namuth "samahara" usas kiyaaganna families wala aya bombayen marena gana kiyada kiyala balanawa witharai..ee minissu wenuwen dukak athi wenne naa..

    nice one pamith(as always proud to be a Nalandian)
     

    pamithK

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    ravicplk said:
    dahasa ganan minisun maha maga maratheee
    kali kadi ath pa wana see vatatheee
    maha maga yanena apahata ee duka danethee
    maduru thula unge sith madurak nomathee

    iiye sidu wuu bomba pipirima nisa ati uu kampanaya nsa liwwa ekak wenna onee..

    maha maga ,bus rathayee ehata mehata yana api wage ayata koi welawe bomba wadila marenna weida danne naa.eka nisa apita danenawa ee baya..ee duka,,
    namuth "samahara" usas kiyaaganna families wala aya bombayen marena gana kiyada kiyala balanawa witharai..ee minissu wenuwen dukak athi wenne naa..

    nice one pamith(as always proud to be a Nalandian)


    thnx ayya..ekama thmai matath kiyanna one wune..mam hithanne message eka kiyawenawa..api wage aya hamadaam abus wala yana aya..ithin apith koi weleda danne ne..eth mewa gana kisi deyak nodanna thoththa babala wage aya innawa kiyana ek atherum ganna one..

    PROUD TO BE A NALANDIAN:love:
     

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    oho pami game over nemey game ekata bahalaney...


    nice one bro..yes nice contrast between each 3 stories
    1.bomb
    2.girl doll & dad
    3.game

    yes for some ppl all the things happening in sri lanka is just a "game" we are just characters..they got the joystick(JOY+STICK)...:rolleyes: nice one malli keep on going...its a a tragic finally....pami do you know any source where I can find how many bombs blast in SL within Last 2 yeas time..sorry for Hijacking ok..any way nice one..

    sampath writes
     
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    sampath312 said:
    oho pami game over nemey game ekata bahalaney...


    nice one bro..yes nice contrast between each 3 stories
    1.bomb
    2.girl doll & dad
    3.game

    yes for some ppl all the things happening in sri lanka is just a "game" we are just characters..they got the joystick(JOY+STICK)...:rolleyes: nice one malli keep on going...its a a tragic finally....pami do you know any source where I can find how many bombs blast in SL within Last 2 yeas time..sorry for Hijacking ok..any way nice one..

    sampath writes


    thnx ayya really appreciate your comment..cant wait to see wht xpa has to say..we are characters..thats dead on!!

    and i have no idea where you can find that stat..try the web..i mean thats logical.:) :)

    + you didnt hijack the thread:rolleyes: :rolleyes:
     

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    pamithK said:
    thnx ayya really appreciate your comment..cant wait to see wht xpa has to say..we are characters..thats dead on!!

    and i have no idea where you can find that stat..try the web..i mean thats logical.:) :)

    + you didnt hijack the thread:rolleyes: :rolleyes:


    aha ok bro ..ya ya xpa..dannam nidi athi:D onna xp wal kawi witharai liyanne kiyala aye talks baha pamiyath ekka:yes: ..

    i meant so as i was asking u a Q without just making a comment abt ur poem.
     

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    sampath312 said:
    aha ok bro ..ya ya xpa..dannam nidi athi:D onna xp wal kawi witharai liyanne kiyala aye talks baha pamiyath ekka:yes: ..

    i meant so as i was asking u a Q without just making a comment abt ur poem.


    eka thamai..habai eka sex poem ekakma nemei..eken mama kiyanne premayata wada kenek raagayata mul thana diya haki bawa..hungak aya eka therum gaththe ne..wal widiyata hithuwa misak..

    anyway ayya aluth ewa liwwe nadda?:)
     

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    pamithK said:
    eka thamai..habai eka sex poem ekakma nemei..eken mama kiyanne premayata wada kenek raagayata mul thana diya haki bawa..hungak aya eka therum gaththe ne..wal widiyata hithuwa misak..

    anyway ayya aluth ewa liwwe nadda?:)


    UK VISA kiyala ekak wada malli still on process;)
     

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    Nice one.....so close to reality............
    Yet....as a budding poet, dont try to ride too close to the reality, you might end up as a commercial artists, a true poet live & die for poems....not anything else...

    You got talent, improve them..........keep on writing......good luck