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mata nirmaneka waraddak kiwwe twisted nemey.
Either you can't read or you are just batshit insane, I assume it's the latter. because, I never paraded that poem infront of you to get you to write in the exact same manner, but from the way you started this thread, I can tell that all you wanted from it was to spread hatred and get back on me. well, it's something you can never do, cos i will not back down for your shit. so what I said about your english poetry stands still.
you can act all innocent and get random jerk-offs to feel sorry about you, it's just their loss. so know that only people you are fooling is the ones you get to worry about you. At least be honest to people that care about you.
kenekge waradak pennana eka ekak.meka thawa ekak.man mage guruwarayagen igena gaththe honda dema ahan nemey.mama liyanne mage hithe widihata.aka nidahas sithuwili godak.api liyana aya widihata nidahas methanadi.rhymes tiyana awath tiyenava nathi awath tiyenava.eya poetry kiyana eka nemey me kiwwama man salunata eyatawath ba negative idea 1k piliganna.ithin man samanyen kamathi na mager jeewithema kakuluwo kiyana pare yanna.oyala kiyawannahonda naraka kiyanna.ath liyana kenekta eya liyana wachana watinava.aka nokiyana kenekta therun ganna amaruy.
hari waraddak kiyana ekey thaman karana field 1ta ena kenek apahasuthaweta path karala moda manasikathwayak windina ekey loku wenasak thiyenava.aka a comments balana eknekta therey
and if what I said made you uncomfortable, I've nothing to do about it, there are many people around here, in this thread to console you am I right? and I've commented on many poems around here, in the same manner I did here, but those people were real good people that knew how to take any sorta criticism. your english writing resembles that of a six year old. may be that's your real mental age. go back to your momma, internet is no place for you.
http://www.elakiri.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1153102
methana eka eka widihata therun aran inna aya me thread 1 kiyolama katha karannako.meke tiakk yaddi therey balala mallen eliyata paneema.anthimata anthimata balaganna puluwan koy tharan sudda sithuwillakin deepu awawadayakda kiyala.KOY THARAN PIWITHURUDA KIYALA.aka nisa mentahna adahas prakasha karana ekenk mulin a thread 1 balala inna
from the begining of this thread you changed the facts to your own advantage and twisted what i'd said, so the lifeless faggots who linger here all day, dreaming of getting laid, could shed tears at your fake weeps. I don't wan t to defend myself cos I don't give a shit about any of these people or you. I'll keep criticizing what I see that deserves it. and if you do the same on me, with proper points, not with bullshit like this thread, I'll be ..well surprised, cos you are not capable of that obviously
anyway since you brought this thread up again let me get back in the business.
lets take your first 'poem' into account.
'my mothers words' ( which btw were in absolute vain, poor old soul)
smile but don't laugh at failures of others
if we do laugh hard we will have tears pouring down our faces, and it's a symbol of truth
one day you will know what this means when you cry
taken the face value, one can say that above is not a goddamn poem, it's a statement.
statement with a moral value, I'll give you that. if this is a poem, even a essay we write about 'laughing at others' can be called a poem.
why I say this ain't a poem? it's clear. because it's a known basic of rule of poetry that
your lines should have a foot. but take the first line and the next and compare the two. you can read them down like reading a book.
I can't understand the point you are trying to bring up to leave EK or to stop writing to EK. Just be positive sis. I read through the controversial thread of yours and I really see no point.
BTW i think you better do some search about Twisted and about his threads before counter commenting on his comments.
I consider twisted as a very knowledgeable person with skills in some areas since I've being here for a long time and have experienced most of his threads and comments.
Really all this BS is not my piece of cake but I'm telling you these since you are, or rather were, a good friend of mine.
Nothing personal sis but try to think out of the box.
BTW i think you better do some search about Twisted and about his threads before counter commenting on his comments.
I consider twisted as a very knowledgeable person with skills in some areas since I've being here for a long time and have experienced most of his threads and comments.
Really all this BS is not my piece of cake but I'm telling you these since you are, or rather were, a good friend of mine.
Nothing personal sis but try to think out of the box.
oya samahara threads wala waada karala thiyena widiha dakkama puduma hithenawa eka comment ekakata mehema watuna eka gana,ao twizted uba nika hitu ko,balapan meke kocchara kavi balana aya inanwada kiyala
you should look at my rep penal right now
anyway. she'll get what she deserves as long as she keeps using her butt to hide the holes in her 'wall of poetry'
I can't understand the point you are trying to bring up to leave EK or to stop writing to EK. Just be positive sis. I read through the controversial thread of yours and I really see no point.
BTW i think you better do some search about Twisted and about his threads before counter commenting on his comments.
I consider twisted as a very knowledgeable person with skills in some areas since I've being here for a long time and have experienced most of his threads and comments.
Really all this BS is not my piece of cake but I'm telling you these since you are, or rather were, a good friend of mine.
Nothing personal sis but try to think out of the box.
well thanks man
it's hard to survive in this site if you didn't kiss some asses, but I'm glad at least a few people are doing it.
in my stay of 3 years around here, I've seen hundreds of this sorta vain threads, If you went to the original thread and read thru our posts you will realise how much this person has bent the facts that really took place. but I'm not really interested in re correcting them.
anyway I suppose, a few bad misunderstandings while reading brought us to this place. but somehow, people who really leaves never tell it before hand.
තමංට කැමති විදිහට තමංගේ ශෛයිලියකට ලියන්න කාටත් අයිතියක් තියෙනවා..........
ඒක කප්පාදු කරන්න කාටවත් බලයක්වත් අයිතියක්වත් නැහැ.........
මෙතන අම්මා මුත්තා ඉඳං මතක් කර කර කුණුහරප කතා කරන උංට අවවාද අනුශාසනා දේනන කවුරුත් නැහැ.....
හරිදෙයක් කියුවොත් පිලිගන්න..........
අනිත් හැම දේකටම තමංට තත්වයක් තියාගෙ මුහුන දෙන්න.......
ඒක කප්පාදු කරන්න කාටවත් බලයක්වත් අයිතියක්වත් නැහැ.........
මෙතන අම්මා මුත්තා ඉඳං මතක් කර කර කුණුහරප කතා කරන උංට අවවාද අනුශාසනා දේනන කවුරුත් නැහැ.....
හරිදෙයක් කියුවොත් පිලිගන්න..........
අනිත් හැම දේකටම තමංට තත්වයක් තියාගෙ මුහුන දෙන්න.......
People who use such language, will never listen. we have tried.
NObody asked her to stop writing her way, I just told her what I thought about them. at which she got worked up.
I often wonder why she'd re act such way, if she has won all those competitions and received compliments from all the known people. what do I matter.
I've said it once, I'll say it again, Bloody show-off, that's what she is.
mata ona point 1ta awa.
thanks aiye.meka kasp ge widiha.rachana widihata hari man kawi liyanava.man kamathi widihak thiyenava.oka therun ganan bari aya godak innava.poddak poems site 1kata gihin balanna eka ekkena kiyana sampradayka krama walin wenas wechcha creations kochara tiyenavada kiyala.aththata awa rasawath.mokada ada kawiyak nisadasak kiyana eka kiyawanna nawathena aya aduy.danna pandithakan okkoma dala bara widihata liyana eka nemey.ape iskoleth hitiya me wage sir kenek.anith okkotama hina wenava.pothak liwwa.poth 1000kin 1y wikinune.mukuth theren na.sampradayay panditha kamay.man katath mukuth kiyan na.wadakuth na.hadawathak nathi minihek gahaniyak kohomada kawiyak liyanna me loke anduraganne.echaray.so oka gana api katha karana eka nawathamu
mata ona point 1ta awa.
man katath mukuth kiyan na.wadakuth na.hadawathak nathi minihek gahaniyak kohomada kawiyak liyanna me loke anduraganne.echaray.so oka gana api katha karana eka nawathamu
if you write poems like essays, do us a favor and call them essays.
and there's apparently a thing or two out there for you to find out about people, even the bad ones. poetass.
For a one bad comment you say good bye what for all positive comments ?
All these deep concerns coz of A GIRL.
I ve seen a lot comments of twisted criticizing, appreciating and all kind of it.
he's giving his opinion thats it. whats the big deal 
Comeon growup girl. One day you'l think, "why did i post such a foolish thread, damn it".
All i want to say is take the NEGATIVE feedback as an amplifier to your talent
Give the community what you can, not what others want..
May be someone else also think your writing is SHITTY or not MATURED and not expressing it by comment. You must thank twisted for at least he give his opinion and also for a BUMP
Good Luck. See the world in realistic manner.
All these deep concerns coz of A GIRL.
I ve seen a lot comments of twisted criticizing, appreciating and all kind of it.
he's giving his opinion thats it. whats the big deal Comeon growup girl. One day you'l think, "why did i post such a foolish thread, damn it".
All i want to say is take the NEGATIVE feedback as an amplifier to your talent
Give the community what you can, not what others want..
May be someone else also think your writing is SHITTY or not MATURED and not expressing it by comment. You must thank twisted for at least he give his opinion and also for a BUMP
Good Luck. See the world in realistic manner.
People who use such language, will never listen. we have tried.
NObody asked her to stop writing her way, I just told her what I thought about them. at which she got worked up.
I often wonder why she'd re act such way, if she has won all those competitions and received compliments from all the known people. what do I matter.
I've said it once, I'll say it again, Bloody show-off, that's what she is.
mulin manussayek wenava amunussayo.kawiyo kiyanneth minissu thamay.habay loku wenasak tiyenava.duka sathuta anduraganna bari ekek kawiyek wen na.molayak thibila madi kawiyekta honda hadawathak thiyenna one.akay ohe eka thana pal wenne.ballek mawa hapuwata man hapan na.so i stopped.thamun adu gane piligaththada mr.twisted mage sir dunna negative comment 1 thamunge nirmana walata.
oya wage perfect abnormal aya ekka tawa mona kathada??oyage comments balala ada mage yaluwek hina una.kiwwa lokuma wachane pissek kiyala.matath pissuda ahuwa pisso kiyana dewal ahanna.man already kiyalane ne thibbe oya poet kenek nemey kiyala.tata
mulin manussayek wenava amunussayo.kawiyo kiyanneth minissu thamay.habay loku wenasak tiyenava.duka sathuta anduraganna bari ekek kawiyek wen na.molayak thibila madi kawiyekta honda hadawathak thiyenna one.akay ohe eka thana pal wenne.ballek mawa hapuwata man hapan na.so i stopped.thamun adu gane piligaththada mr.twisted mage sir dunna negative comment 1 thamunge nirmana walata.
tata
ohh . Mr. Twisted you must leave EK for this comment. Right NOW
in your terms, I think you just did bite me back, there
duka sathuta???? are you joking? I won't say 'oh you are so nice' just to make you feel 'happy'. look I'm sorry if all this is making you sad. but I'm only telling you what I feel. Like I said, it might be just me. so save your breath to write more essays. or work on your so called poetry.
thamun adu gane piligaththada mr.twisted mage sir dunna negative comment 1 thamunge nirmana walata.
tata
yeah I did accept it
go back and read the thread. Like I already suggested you, READING IS YOUR FRIEND!so you just go around showing my comments to your teachers and your friends and your neighbors? I'm actually a bit flattered here
ohh . Mr. Twisted you must leave EK for this comment. Right NOW
Believe me man, I'm in tears write now, oh it hurts
good bye cruel world
mehemai...man danne nehe mokada une haryatama kiyala...mokada me dawas wala mata threads follow karanna behe work karana nisa....
anyway...for Twisted :-
i know u like criticizing...i know u from a log time now...i remember only one good thing u did...that was that English poem thing which was stolen by Teena@ and posted...u got the real owner of that poem and showed us the right path...but becoz i thought that she was too young and done a mistake i tried my best to solve that problem....but u did the very right thing that day....so i see good in ur criticizing....
but like this...hmm...i don't like..
.that's my own idea...
For kasp :-
online life is like this..i don't know how can i tell u ....but it's hard to live...know that many kind of people are here....some are good some are so bad...and some are good for some and bad for some....that's the nature of people....this is an open community...im not accepting what has happened.but ...those things happen...i know it's hard to bare.but u'll get used to it.... leaving is not a solution at all...well for me...i went through many hard times...but i still here....and i will
so learn the thing....when things go like this u will feel that u r accused for nothing at all...many will say pointless things at u...(i say this in ur view...coz i know how things go when in a situation like this) bare all...or ignore all...BE...
anyway...for Twisted :-
i know u like criticizing...i know u from a log time now...i remember only one good thing u did...that was that English poem thing which was stolen by Teena@ and posted...u got the real owner of that poem and showed us the right path...but becoz i thought that she was too young and done a mistake i tried my best to solve that problem....but u did the very right thing that day....so i see good in ur criticizing....
but like this...hmm...i don't like..
.that's my own idea...For kasp :-
online life is like this..i don't know how can i tell u ....but it's hard to live...know that many kind of people are here....some are good some are so bad...and some are good for some and bad for some....that's the nature of people....this is an open community...
im not accepting what has happened.but ...those things happen...i know it's hard to bare.but u'll get used to it.... leaving is not a solution at all...well for me...i went through many hard times...but i still here....and i willso learn the thing....when things go like this u will feel that u r accused for nothing at all...many will say pointless things at u...(i say this in ur view...coz i know how things go when in a situation like this) bare all...or ignore all...BE...
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