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hey awantha this is nice poem. i hve read it several time as i think you have special ability writing poems in sinhala better than you think. really i wish you to write more sinhala and english poems.
 

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    sachii said:
    hey awantha this is nice poem. i hve read it several time as i think you have special ability writing poems in sinhala better than you think. really i wish you to write more sinhala and english poems.

    hehe you musta read it more times since you typed it in sinhala..so thank you very much for comment and the big help youve been :P

    and i don't really think im that talented lol but i will sure keep writing
    thanks again
     

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    Twisted my beloved bro
    Believe me still i couldnt find a single wrd to admire the dark beauty of this poem machan

    U knw
    Ignorance negligence harassment r my most favorite suject
    Umba eka hondatama dannavane (witnessed in EMINEM thred ne)

    So xtreamly maxxa machan thats all i can say for now and I'l after reading the dic

    Meke subject ekath taramak NUMB song eka vage neda?
    Its also 1 of my wrshiped song

    so that means this is wrshiped poem of mine

    Keep it pal
    Niyamama niyamayi
    English kotasa tama maxxama

    We r waiting for ur poems machoo
    :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
     

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    Zeus said:
    Twisted my beloved bro
    Believe me still i couldnt find a single wrd to admire the dark beauty of this poem machan

    U knw
    Ignorance negligence harassment r my most favorite suject
    Umba eka hondatama dannavane (witnessed in EMINEM thred ne)

    So xtreamly maxxa machan thats all i can say for now and I'l after reading the dic

    Meke subject ekath taramak NUMB song eka vage neda?
    Its also 1 of my wrshiped song

    so that means this is wrshiped poem of mine

    Keep it pal
    Niyamama niyamayi
    English kotasa tama maxxama

    We r waiting for ur poems machoo
    :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

    wow thanks so much bro you always comment something amazing lol ..
    btw may be this is a lil similar to numb but not necessarily the girl im talking about here is addicted to drugs..
    and the last english part is from another english poem of mine..from which i took the idea for this sinhala poem.hehe

    so thanks again bro...really highly appreciated ..
     

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    twisted said:
    wow thanks so much bro you always comment something amazing lol ..

    That bcz im little bit differ n lunatic nisa vennathi hehe :D

    btw may be this is a lil similar to numb but not necessarily the girl im talking about here is addicted to drugs..

    Thats wht i used "taramak" in my comment hehe
    But machah in this poem still hidden the roots of ignorence negligence and most of my fav subjects so theres no any importance about the realtion to the numb
    hehe


    U knw ne machan mst of he ppl used to just blaim not to figureout the truth inside it

    No one bother y she addicted to drugs
    Many of usjust focussed to the effects not for the primitive causes
    As ex all of us focussed on the fruit not to the roots of the tree ne cz cant eat it or its not delicious like fruit

    I have lots of in ma mind bro even those kinda of issues related doctrine of cause and effect which can find in Buddhists teaching to but i cnt spit them all here
    and screw the thred machan :D

    so thanks again bro...really highly appreciated ..

    And also extreamly plesure to me to entertain a poem like this which managed to see out of the box :D
     

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    Zeus said:
    Thats wht i used "taramak" in my comment hehe
    But machah in this poem still hidden the roots of ignorence negligence and most of my fav subjects so theres no any importance about the realtion to the numb
    hehe


    U knw ne machan mst of he ppl used to just blaim not to figureout the truth inside it

    No one bother y she addicted to drugs
    Many of usjust focussed to the effects not for the primitive causes
    As ex all of us focussed on the fruit not to the roots of the tree ne cz cant eat it or its not delicious like fruit

    I have lots of in ma mind bro even those kinda of issues related doctrine of cause and effect which can find in Buddhists teaching to but i cnt spit them all here
    and screw the thred machan :D



    And also extreamly plesure to me to entertain a poem like this which managed to see out of the box :D

    hehe ya..the reason behind her drug addiction could be the society in which she feels mistreated or rejected for who she really is or may be she's being rejected only because of her addiction..I'm not sure lol it's open for you people to interpret..

    well yes who wants to understand others lol but everybody wants others to see them and accept them ..that matter I'm not going to discuss now lol ...

    and thanks again bro lol i wasn't really concerned on making a change (outa box) but i just want to write what i really have in my mind
    thanks again for your support deyya
    you two should start writing lol i bet you could write pretty well since you are into strange themes am i right
     

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    well yes who wants to understand others lol but everybody wants others to see them and accept them ..that matter I'm not going to discuss now lol ...

    Of course pal
    And let me change the path littlebit man
    If someone who always praise us and accept us
    he'll bcome our frnd
    But if he criticisise and reject us ??
    In Ek he'll defa going to the ignorence list hihi:lol:

    So tell me
    Criticism and compliment
    Which one is the mst important (remembr i used most)
    I think critisism
    So ur point which Everyone ants others to accept them is 100% pure truth according to my thory( u may reject my theory)

    And @this stage also theres a proclamation of Lord Buddha and this time also i'll keep silent cz i dnt want to give this thre a phase of a religion :D


    but i just want to write what i really have in my mind

    Just do it man thats all i wnt :D

    you two should start writing lol i bet you could write pretty well since you are into strange themes am i right
    I trid my best machan but i cant neveyi
    I dont mata e rassava allane na ban
    Even my beloved sis G2H tris her best to make it
    Eth mata bahamayi machoo
    taraha venna epa :D
     

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    Zeus said:
    Of course pal
    And let me change the path littlebit man
    If someone who always praise us and accept us
    he'll bcome our frnd
    But if he criticisise and reject us ??
    In Ek he'll defa going to the ignorence list hihi:lol:


    if somebody reject you as a person well i don't see how you going to make friends with him lol ....and let's not talk about ek lol

    So tell me
    Criticism and compliment
    Which one is the mst important (remembr i used most)
    I think critisism
    So ur point which Everyone ants others to accept them is 100% pure truth according to my thory( u may reject my theory)

    lol a fair criticism is better than a false praise ..as simple as that

    And @this stage also theres a proclamation of Lord Buddha and this time also i'll keep silent cz i dnt want to give this thre a phase of a religion :D
    Just do it man thats all i wnt :D


    I trid my best machan but i cant neveyi
    I dont mata e rassava allane na ban
    Even my beloved sis G2H tris her best to make it
    Eth mata bahamayi machoo
    taraha venna epa :D

    haha it's all in your mind..but suit yourself..i find it expressive
     

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    machn u always keep postinf gr8 stuff here. elakiri.
    u hv a twisted poet in u. :yes:

    words sounds dark. i lyk dat feeling. ;)
     

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    kalanaweerlk said:
    machn u always keep postinf gr8 stuff here. elakiri.
    u hv a twisted poet in u. :yes:

    words sounds dark. i lyk dat feeling. ;)

    :rofl::rofl: name has it don't you think

    thanks bro if you people find something amusing in them well what else i could ask for..thanks ..
     

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    twisted said:
    :rofl::rofl: name has it don't you think

    thanks bro if you people find something amusing in them well what else i could ask for..thanks ..

    should thank you for posting these kinda stuff here.. ;)