hallucinating - sinhala

twisted

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    jayanthah said:
    Machan, Ron, it seems like you are a great asset that EK has, you know quite variety of subjects & seems like you have a great insight & knowledge on many different things. I believe you need to participate bit more than you do atm, to help these young lads!!! Sometimes back, we had a good debate & discussion on sinhala poetry, Mahagamasekera etc, you were not in EK then.

    Check on this guy FREEDNBEING's creations if you have time, read the comments too, those threads are certainly too good to go in to oblivion.

    Sorry, twisted for hijacking your thread, you check on that too :)

    :yes::yes: we see useless fights everyday at ek and many capable members of ek just stands back which is bad. guys like these should come forward and take part more actively in this community...most of us don't have much knowledge to maintain a good back bone regarding the quality of the community.
     

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    ronsilva said:
    Bro.... certainly you’ve got the talent to write poems in Sinhala.

    As Shakespeare gave the boost for English literature so did Ediriweera Sarachchandra and Mahagamasekere had changed and raised the bar for Sinhala literature to a different dimension....

    I appreciate the seed that you have planted on your creation for us to understand and dig deep about the characteristics of the cornered people in the society...

    keep writing in both languages.... good luck!!

    thanks :P im stepping aside english poetry for a while ..that's the real deal for me..it's much easier to me than sinhala poetry..i want to study before writing anymore....
     

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    twisted said:
    thanks :P im stepping aside english poetry for a while ..that's the real deal for me..it's much easier to me than sinhala poetry..i want to study before writing anymore....


    hey bro.... if u need any help to brush up your sinhala poems, pls do not hesitate to send me a pm.... ok bro.....

    good day!!
     

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    ronsilva said:
    Jayanthah bro.. I am more active in a thread called "SL old hit songs add here"

    Right now I am playing a vital role there by molding and preparing our young lads for their unseen tomorrow..

    **sorry twisted bro. I just wanted to reply Jayanthah***

    Machan, Thts why I said "you need to do even more", I saw your contribution on SL old hits, good work bro, keep it up, would like to see your presence all over EK....

    OOOOOOps.........sorry Twisted, I've done it again, wont do it again...........cheers!!!!
     

    twisted

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    ronsilva said:
    hey bro.... if u need any help to brush up your sinhala poems, pls do not hesitate to send me a pm.... ok bro.....

    good day!!

    alright lol you can do it here...show me my errors frankly lol i like being criticized ruthlessly :P if i had a question ill sure pm you ..thanks.
     

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    jayanthah said:
    Machan, Thts why I said "you need to do even more", I saw your contribution on SL old hits, good work bro, keep it up, would like to see your presence all over EK....

    OOOOOOps.........sorry Twisted, I've done it again, wont do it again...........cheers!!!!

    it's alright bro ...that chat was totally worth it.
     

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    twisted said:
    alright lol you can do it here...show me my errors frankly lol i like being criticized ruthlessly :P if i had a question ill sure pm you ..thanks.




    bro...frankly I don't have any critics to offer you for this poem as it was well composed.

    but certainly I will start from your next poem onwards... definitely i will give u a constructive feedback..

    stay tuned...cheers!!
     

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    ronsilva said:
    bro...frankly I don't have any critics to offer you for this poem as it was well composed.

    but certainly I will start from your next poem onwards... definitely i will give u a constructive feedback..

    stay tuned...cheers!!

    thanks :P ill write something new soon...is there poems that you didn't post at ek, of yours.
     

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    twisted said:
    thanks :P ill write something new soon...is there poems that you didn't post at ek, of yours.

    three of them so far...one was in english and the other two were in sinhala.

    here you go and let me know....

    the latest one that I've posted in last week was "sihina kodewwa"

    I saw that you have already commented on it.

    "small pain in my chest" was the english poem. "thal arambe dedunna" was the other sinhala poem
     

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    ronsilva said:
    three of them so far...one was in english and the other two were in sinhala.

    here you go and let me know....

    the latest one that I've posted in last week was "sihina kodewwa"

    I saw that you have already commented on it.

    "small pain in my chest" was the english poem. "thal arambe dedunna" was the other sinhala poem

    ill see bro :P