Mchn poem eka hodai, eth mata eka gana echchara kiyanna therenne na.
Bt abt da graphic, i cn tell somethin abt dat.
Best things I saw in your creation.
1. Simple poem
2. I like the background colurs.
3. pictures u'v chosen.
I'm nt neglectin dt, bt these r jst my suggesions 4 a better craetion.
1. font colour ekai style ekai tikak simple unanam hodai kiyala hithenawa. dn it's eye catchin
2. 4tos wala edges thawa tikak blur kaloth hodai.
3. Oya priority eka denna one oyage poem ekata. eka nisa graphic eka light(opacity) karanna.
Anyway, great creation. keep it up