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ChuttaFX

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superb poem with a nice meaning bro :D
but the meaning might be a little bit hard to understand for me, if you'd not included the 'atuwawa' here. :P
first, I, in facts, thought that this was something gothic.
 

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    ChuttaFX said:
    superb poem with a nice meaning bro :D
    but the meaning might be a little bit hard to understand for me, if you'd not included the 'atuwawa' here. :P
    first, I, in facts, thought that this was something gothic.

    may be the gothic imaginary then lol thank you lots bro

    and chintha4u had deciphered it pretty well :P.
     

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    twisted said:
    may be the gothic imaginary then lol thank you lots bro

    and chintha4u had deciphered it pretty well :P.
    welcome :D
    yep...gothic.. otherwise how this kinda meaning got connected with death.
    once a poem get mixed up with gothic imaginary, non-goths may have to hardly decipher it. :P

    of cause, :yes: chintha4u had deciphered clearly & nicely too. :D
     

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    ChuttaFX said:
    welcome :D
    yep...gothic.. otherwise how this kinda meaning got connected with death.
    once a poem get mixed up with gothic imaginary, non-goths may have to hardly decipher it. :P

    of cause, :yes: chintha4u had deciphered clearly & nicely too. :D

    hmm i don't know bro may be look at it with a clear mind like gothic imaginary aside :yes::P
     

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    Bro..another great creation....

    if u don't mind can I suggest something? since you are writing this kind of high vocabulary poetic words in sinhala, I would like to see your comments in sinhala too.

    By doing so, it will definitely beneficial for you to create more and more sinhala poems in near future.

    This is a kind of constructive feedback that you were expected from me....

    Good day!!
     

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    ronsilva said:
    Bro..another great creation....

    if u don't mind can I suggest something? since you are writing this kind of high vocabulary poetic words in sinhala, I would like to see your comments in sinhala too.

    By doing so, it will definitely beneficial for you to create more and more sinhala poems in near future.

    This is a kind of constructive feedback that you were expected from me....

    Good day!!

    thanks bro ...thing is i find it easier to type in english ...and much more expressive in that way. may be sinhala being my mothertongue, it's difficult to shoot out whats in the depths of mind lol....

    thanks again for your help :P ill try to do that.