chintha4u said:Same has happened to me. I think they don't try enough.
yeah..sometimes it's our fault as well..that we make it too abstract

chintha4u said:Same has happened to me. I think they don't try enough.

ravinatha said:Machan m confuced
me mama hithana idea ekamada?
wts ds abt?
is that what you was thinking too?

ChuttaFX said:superb poem with a nice meaning bro
but the meaning might be a little bit hard to understand for me, if you'd not included the 'atuwawa' here.
first, I, in facts, thought that this was something gothic.
.welcometwisted said:may be the gothic imaginary then lol thank you lots bro
and chintha4u had deciphered it pretty well.


chintha4u had deciphered clearly & nicely too. 
ChuttaFX said:welcome
yep...gothic.. otherwise how this kinda meaning got connected with death.
once a poem get mixed up with gothic imaginary, non-goths may have to hardly decipher it.
of cause,chintha4u had deciphered clearly & nicely too.
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k i wud try nxt timetwisted said:hmm i don't know bro may be look at it with a clear mind like gothic imaginary aside![]()
really nice poem anyhow 
ronsilva said:Bro..another great creation....
if u don't mind can I suggest something? since you are writing this kind of high vocabulary poetic words in sinhala, I would like to see your comments in sinhala too.
By doing so, it will definitely beneficial for you to create more and more sinhala poems in near future.
This is a kind of constructive feedback that you were expected from me....
Good day!!
ill try to do that.