Lets make a rhyming poem...

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side

 

[Tissaka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat
Ijsh hyedf lku nsjhf iwnfia kjnaf jki jnfuao lmfhaiw jfap qeoxlfjw rpaz namfiglw

 

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time

 

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined

 

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

 

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

And thats the end FOR TODAY! the poem will be closed for now...
on behalf of Lil_chika and myself we welcome ur comments on our poem thus far..
and would appreciate the feedback... tnx guys and gals tc!

ps- tnx Lil_chika was fun tc!

 

[ama_li]

Whoa..gud work lasanka & lil. keep it up. v hv gr8 poets here.

 

[lasanka]

Whoa..gud work lasanka & lil. keep it up. v hv gr8 poets here.

hey amali tnx heheh ya lil_chika is really gud.. hehe glad u like it..

 

[Kasunm]

wow lasa this is gr8 i haven't seen the poet inside you till now keep it up.and to you too chika baby lolzzz gr8 idea men keep it up.too bad i'm not a poet start this tonight too will you

 

[iboo]

the inner soul of ur hearts has spoken.... That poem was coool

 

[lasanka]

hey tnx guys!

 

[Lil_chica]

hey tnx guys!

YEah thank you!

 

[lasanka]

YEah thank you!

heyyy how u!

 

[Lil_chica]

heyyy how u!

Im great thanx how is ure self? im in college now argg LOl...why dont u carry on wrirting the poem? ...I'll try to think of few lines

 

[Tissaka]

what's up guys?

 

[lasanka]

Im great thanx how is ure self? im in college now argg LOl...why dont u carry on wrirting the poem? ...I'll try to think of few lines

umm k but ill be bak in a bit k.. say 15 mins ... its ur turn to start the verse..

 

[Lil_chica]

umm k but ill be bak in a bit k.. say 15 mins ... its ur turn to start the verse..

oOOoOooO OooOkaY lOL lEMME tHINK ermmmm......