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[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

ohoma tama ban awashya kena laga nat unama

Hm ow, awashya kena daala giyahamath ohoma wenawa ban

 

[ZurieL]

tanikama danunama nikanma kawiyo wenawa.nice poem bro,ai ithin dhan liyanne naththe.

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

tanikama danunama nikanma kawiyo wenawa.nice poem bro,ai ithin dhan liyanne naththe.

danuth liyanna one issellama parana mathakaya awadhi karaganna eka hodai kiyala hithuna sis,, ethakota liyanna puluwan godak,, mokada e thanikama mata aayeth danila thiyenne Thx 4 ur cmnt

 

[sharki333]

wOw pattaaazzz rep+

 

[twisted]

it's pretty...bad. you are just repeating the same word all over the ..thing.

 

[ZurieL]

danuth liyanna one issellama parana mathakaya awadhi karaganna eka hodai kiyala hithuna sis,, ethakota liyanna puluwan godak,, mokada e thanikama mata aayeth danila thiyenne Thx 4 ur cmnt

me hadisiye kohomada danune,rep denna baalu

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

wOw pattaaazzz rep+

thx

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

me hadisiye kohomada danune,rep denna baalu

Hadissiye nemei tikak kal eth welawak thibbe naha owa post karanna dannawane

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

it's pretty...bad. you are just repeating the same word all over the ..thing.

Thx 4 ur cmnt bro..

but thiz z not a lyk repeating thiz is how i feel now
same thing n same loneliness

 

[twisted]

Thx 4 ur cmnt bro..

but thiz z not a lyk repeating thiz is how i feel now
same thing n same loneliness

think mostly what concerns the reader is the quality of the poem ..not your personal shit. i also spotted a spelling mistake in this. pay some attention to what you are doing. you are not even describing anything here ..like how you are alone and the effects of it ..you are just repeatedly saying that you are lonely and you have nobody which doesn't add up to much imagery...so this is honestly a bunch of line..you must have kind of a rythm and an ability to give the reader some pictures. and i pity the fools who praised this..they are not doing you a favor. ..keep writing and goodluck.

 

[damm2009]

me too alone... I can feel it
Nice poem bro

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

think mostly what concerns the reader is the quality of the poem ..not your personal shit. i also spotted a spelling mistake in this. pay some attention to what you are doing. you are not even describing anything here ..like how you are alone and the effects of it ..you are just repeatedly saying that you are lonely and you have nobody which doesn't add up to much imagery...so this is honestly a bunch of line..you must have kind of a rythm and an ability to give the reader some pictures. and i pity the fools who praised this..they are not doing you a favor. ..keep writing and goodluck.

Dude
mata hithena de mama liwwe nathuwa anik ayage hithata hariyana dewal liyanna mata one kamak naha, thamanta hithena de liyala post karanna kagenwath awasara ganna one naha, oyage taste eka wena ekak wenna puluwa, meke kawi liyana hamoma wage liyanne thamanta hithena de misak wena ayata one dewal nemei..e ka nisa mata one de mama liyanawa.. and thx 4 ur comnt

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

 

[twisted]

Dude
mata hithena de mama liwwe nathuwa anik ayage hithata hariyana dewal liyanna mata one kamak naha, thamanta hithena de liyala post karanna kagenwath awasara ganna one naha, oyage taste eka wena ekak wenna puluwa, meke kawi liyana hamoma wage liyanne thamanta hithena de misak wena ayata one dewal nemei..e ka nisa mata one de mama liyanawa.. and thx 4 ur comnt

ok I said what i felt about your poem and im entitled to my opinion.

 

[dilrasan]

I know the Feeling well machan...
ewa gena ithin katha karala wedak nehe...

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

ok I said what i felt about your poem and im entitled to my opinion.

thanks for ur advices bro

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

I know the Feeling well machan...
ewa gena ithin katha karala wedak nehe...

ow machan...eka danenna ehema deyak apita wennama one kochchara eka danenawada kiyala therenna thx bro

 

[cspmaxx]

nice one bro..

keep it up

 

[KrAzY_iN_LuV]

nice one bro..

keep it up

Thx Bro

 

[blacktarzan]

nice creation bro
loneliness I It...
the only way to talk to your rt
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